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Featherless Angels

How did you become featherless
Angels are always blessed and do bless
Standing too close to the fire
Devil got me in a crossfire
Make sure you always tell God yes

Copyright © Paula Goldsmith | Year Posted 2023

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Nancy Kaufman Date: 11/15/2023 2:53:00 AM Hi Paula, I really liked this one. I'm going to fav it now. Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 11/15/2023 12:25:00 PM Thanks for reading/writing. Good to see you. Glad you like my angel write. I see fav??? That puts a big smile on my heart. Thanks... Have a great day writing away....................

Linda Alice Fowler Date: 10/30/2023 9:49:00 AM Oh dear Paula. Stay out of the crossfire!! I hope you have a great day! :) Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 10/31/2023 9:18:00 PM Thanks for reading/writing. Good to see you. Glad you like my angel write. Oh yes, stay out of the crossfire/do not get burned. Have a great day writing away....................

Gershon Wolf Date: 10/28/2023 7:54:00 PM Looks like God fires angels once-in-a-while. Gotta keep those winged things honest... Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 10/29/2023 11:33:00 AM Thanks for reading/writing. Good to see you. Glad you enjoyed my angel Limerick write. Oh yes, God needs to keep His angels honest. Have a great day writing away....................

Timothy Ray Date: 10/28/2023 6:19:00 PM loved it....such searing lines.....loved it Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 10/29/2023 11:31:00 AM Thanks for reading/writing. Good to see you. Glad you love my angel Limerick write. It was fun to write. Have a great day writing away....................

Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 10/28/2023 10:47:00 AM Hello Paula, I enjoyed this poem .I hope she will say yes to god. Hugs /Darelene\ Login to Reply Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 10/29/2023 3:22:00 PM Hello Paula, Good to see you. Yes I enjoyed this poem. Yes angels always say yes to God. I will have a great day writing away. Hugs.\ Darlene/ Paula Goldsmith Date: 10/29/2023 11:29:00 AM Thanks for reading/writing. Good to see you. Glad you enjoyed my angel Limerick write. Angels always say yes to God. Hugs... Have a great day writing away....................

Silent One Date: 10/28/2023 10:08:00 AM Lovely limerick! Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 10/29/2023 11:28:00 AM Thanks for reading/writing. Good to see you. Glad you enjoyed my fun angel Limerick write. Have a great day writing away....................

David Kavanagh Date: 10/28/2023 5:48:00 AM Icarus springs to mind here Paula, flying too close to the sun, nonetheless your message comes through crystal clear, even for this agnostic, a Limerick with a serious moral, who’d off thought, cheers David Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 10/29/2023 11:28:00 AM Thanks for reading/writing. Good to see you. Glad you like my angel Limerick write. I enjoyed writing it. Have a great day writing away....................

Kim Rodrigues Date: 10/27/2023 8:59:00 PM With God on your side that crossfire will burn only your opponent! Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 10/29/2023 11:26:00 AM Thanks for reading/writing. Good to see you. Glad you enjoyed my angel Limerick write. Have a great day writing away....................

Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 10/27/2023 7:45:00 PM I enjoyed reading this fantastic limerick, Paula. Best of wishes for the contest. :) Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 10/29/2023 11:26:00 AM Thanks for reading/writing and for your best wishes. Good to see you. Glad you enjoyed reading/found my fun angel to be a fantastic Limerick write. You put a smile on my heart. Thanks... Have a great day writing away...............

Suzanne Delaney Date: 10/27/2023 4:16:00 PM Singed angels wings is a real tongue twister. G L in the contest. Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 10/29/2023 11:25:00 AM Thanks for reading/writing and for your GL. Good to see you. Glad you like this tongue twister. Have a great day writing away....................

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/27/2023 3:59:00 PM Oh my. I think I misread the contest and thought it was called "fatherless". Now your limerick makes a lot more sense to me. Good thing I saw this before writing on fatherless angels Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 10/29/2023 11:25:00 AM Thanks for reading/writing. Good to see you. Bet a "fatherless" angel would make for a good read. Have fun with your angel Limerick write. Have a great day writing away....................

Sara Kendrick Date: 10/27/2023 2:52:00 PM Whoa!! So sad about the angel getting scinged. Creative lines penned. Thanks for sharing it and for stopping by my page. Sara K Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 10/29/2023 11:23:00 AM Thanks for reading/writing. Good to see you. Glad you like my fun angel Limerick write. Get tooooo close to the fire and one gets burned. Even angels... Have a great day writing away....................

I Am Anaya Date: 10/27/2023 2:39:00 PM What a concept, featherless angels, your Limerick just flowed there and is perfect for the contest! Nice one. Xhugs Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 10/28/2023 1:59:00 PM Thanks for reading/writing. Good to see you. Glad you like my concept to this angel Limerick write.  Have a great day writing away....................

Paula Goldsmith Date: 10/27/2023 1:20:00 PM Featherless Angels ~ Date Written:10/27/2023 Login to Reply