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Featherless Angels

How did you become featherless
Angels are always blessed and do bless
Standing too close to the fire
Devil got me in a crossfire
Make sure you always tell God yes

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Nancy Kaufman

November 15, 2023 at 2:53 AM

Hi Paula, I really liked this one. I'm going to fav it now.

Paula Goldsmith

November 15, 2023 at 12:25 PM

Thanks for reading/writing. Good to see you. Glad you like my angel write. I see fav??? That puts a big smile on my heart. Thanks... Have a great day writing away....................

Linda Alice Fowler

October 30, 2023 at 9:49 AM

Oh dear Paula. Stay out of the crossfire!! I hope you have a great day! :)

Paula Goldsmith

October 31, 2023 at 9:18 PM

Thanks for reading/writing. Good to see you. Glad you like my angel write. Oh yes, stay out of the crossfire/do not get burned. Have a great day writing away....................

Gershon Wolf

October 28, 2023 at 7:54 PM

Looks like God fires angels once-in-a-while. Gotta keep those winged things honest...

Paula Goldsmith

October 29, 2023 at 11:33 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Good to see you. Glad you enjoyed my angel Limerick write. Oh yes, God needs to keep His angels honest. Have a great day writing away....................

Timothy Ray

October 28, 2023 at 6:19 PM

loved it....such searing lines.....loved it

Paula Goldsmith

October 29, 2023 at 11:31 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Good to see you. Glad you love my angel Limerick write. It was fun to write. Have a great day writing away....................

Darlene De Beaulieu

October 28, 2023 at 10:47 AM

Hello Paula, I enjoyed this poem .I hope she will say yes to god. Hugs /Darelene\

Darlene De Beaulieu

October 29, 2023 at 3:22 PM

Hello Paula, Good to see you. Yes I enjoyed this poem. Yes angels always say yes to God. I will have a great day writing away. Hugs.\ Darlene/

Paula Goldsmith

October 29, 2023 at 11:29 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Good to see you. Glad you enjoyed my angel Limerick write. Angels always say yes to God. Hugs... Have a great day writing away....................

Silent One

October 28, 2023 at 10:08 AM

Lovely limerick!

Paula Goldsmith

October 29, 2023 at 11:28 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Good to see you. Glad you enjoyed my fun angel Limerick write. Have a great day writing away....................

David Kavanagh

October 28, 2023 at 5:48 AM

Icarus springs to mind here Paula, flying too close to the sun, nonetheless your message comes through crystal clear, even for this agnostic, a Limerick with a serious moral, who’d off thought, cheers David

Paula Goldsmith

October 29, 2023 at 11:28 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Good to see you. Glad you like my angel Limerick write. I enjoyed writing it. Have a great day writing away....................

Kim Rodrigues

October 27, 2023 at 8:59 PM

With God on your side that crossfire will burn only your opponent!

Paula Goldsmith

October 29, 2023 at 11:26 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Good to see you. Glad you enjoyed my angel Limerick write. Have a great day writing away....................

Evelyn Judy Buehler

October 27, 2023 at 7:45 PM

I enjoyed reading this fantastic limerick, Paula. Best of wishes for the contest. :)

Paula Goldsmith

October 29, 2023 at 11:26 AM

Thanks for reading/writing and for your best wishes. Good to see you. Glad you enjoyed reading/found my fun angel to be a fantastic Limerick write. You put a smile on my heart. Thanks... Have a great day writing away...............

Suzanne Delaney

October 27, 2023 at 4:16 PM

Singed angels wings is a real tongue twister. G L in the contest.

Paula Goldsmith

October 29, 2023 at 11:25 AM

Thanks for reading/writing and for your GL. Good to see you. Glad you like this tongue twister. Have a great day writing away....................

Andrea Dietrich

October 27, 2023 at 3:59 PM

Oh my. I think I misread the contest and thought it was called "fatherless". Now your limerick makes a lot more sense to me. Good thing I saw this before writing on fatherless angels

Paula Goldsmith

October 29, 2023 at 11:25 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Good to see you. Bet a "fatherless" angel would make for a good read. Have fun with your angel Limerick write. Have a great day writing away....................

Sara Kendrick

October 27, 2023 at 2:52 PM

Whoa!! So sad about the angel getting scinged. Creative lines penned. Thanks for sharing it and for stopping by my page. Sara K

Paula Goldsmith

October 29, 2023 at 11:23 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Good to see you. Glad you like my fun angel Limerick write. Get tooooo close to the fire and one gets burned. Even angels... Have a great day writing away....................