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Fearlessly Going Above and Beyond

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I was interested in what will happen. In the endmost fate of this debilitating dimness. An insightful major established man advised me: It will be a time when one's destiny will be entwined. Traditions and elderly people are no longer honored. Poorer families will be vying to pay for food and need. Individuals who are dumb yet rich will become educated. All earth lose the propensity to characterize what has occurred. Individuals talents come from a lack of accessible record. Everyday food and service prices drastically skyrocketed. There is no fuel or cars, and all freshwater has receded. Audacious ascension to the foolhardy conclave held What would we expect from this cutting-edge time period?

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Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 7/20/2021 10:33:00 AM

A dystopian world that seems ever closer. We now endure a global pandemic. It is truly horrendous....Delice

Sotto Poet
Date: 7/20/2021 10:43:00 AM

True, Delice, we neither know the destination nor the end of all this. Thanks for the insightful comment

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 7/19/2021 11:57:00 AM

A nicely done poem, Lasaad. These are sobering thoughts, my friend. There's so much chaos in the world today. I feel like Judy. These do seem like the last days to me. Best wishes, Evelyn

Sotto Poet
Date: 7/19/2021 1:38:00 PM

Sorry if I made you feel uneasy, Evelyn; I was under the impression that mayhem was everywhere. Thank you for reading and commenting.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/19/2021 10:05:00 AM

Speaking of gloomy it seems we are in concert with each other *lol* you painted this piece with shadows and caused me to look under rocks and behind trees. Bravo my friend.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/19/2021 4:30:00 PM

No worries, I did not take it as a criticism. ;0)

Sotto Poet
Date: 7/19/2021 11:36:00 AM

I'm not criticizing you for being gloomy, my buddy; it's just an idea; as a poet, it's not simple to come up with anything pleasant to write about; I wish I were able to do so. Thanks, Rick, Lasaad

Judy Ball

Date: 7/19/2021 6:57:00 AM

This s very scary yet prophetic and things seem to be headed in that direction. I'm praying that Jesus comes quickly that we do not reach that pinnacle. A good wright my friend. God Bless, JB

Sotto Poet
Date: 7/19/2021 7:59:00 AM

I’m so sorry Judy I didn’t meant to scare anyone, it’s just some thoughts that could be unreal at least for so many generations to come, appreciate your comment

Vijay Pandit

Date: 7/19/2021 5:52:00 AM

You paint a dire picture of the future, Lasaad. May be the world will rebalance when life on earth is no longer tenable. Kudos for your thoughts.

Sotto Poet
Date: 7/19/2021 8:01:00 AM

Thank you so much Vijay appreciate your thoughtfulness and kindness, my deepest regards and blessings

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 7/18/2021 10:40:00 PM

I have a feeling we're not far from that state of affairs. Great perspective. Have a nice week.

Sotto Poet
Date: 7/19/2021 3:26:00 AM

Thank Victor, you’re right I guess we are close that situation, have a blessed week too.