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Fearing Fratricide

Freddy filched Frankie’s fav’rit fudge, fearless Frankie flattened Freddy to the floor. Father Fletcher fearing fratricide fastened Frankie’s feet firmly to the farmyard fence while friends fixed Freddy’s fractious frame fast to the family Ford. December 8, 2020 contest: Alliteration sponsor: Eve Roper

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Joanna Feltham

Date: 12/23/2020 1:56:00 AM

How funny, 'Frankie flattened freddy' sounds like me with my siblings growing up. Congratulations on your winning placement.

Reason A. Poteet
Date: 12/25/2020 7:30:00 PM

thank you, Joanna. My sister and I had our moments of meanness amidst some loving, caring times back in the 50/60's. Happy New Year.

Beata Agustin

Date: 12/22/2020 9:51:00 PM

Wow! Congrats! Cheering you amidst blest Christmas spirit, while sharing with you "... the gift of God is eternal life through Jesus Christ our Lord" (Romans 6:23 of the King James Bible). God bless you.

Reason A. Poteet
Date: 12/25/2020 7:21:00 PM

Thank you, Beata, we do share the gifts, the many gifts of our Creator and Savior God. Christ is our Redeemer and soon-coming (I hope) King of Kings.

Eve Roper

Date: 12/22/2020 7:53:00 PM

Reason, congratulations on your win. May your family celebrate an enjoyable Christmas with not only gifts, but with faith, hope and peace of the Lord. Hugs Eve

Reason A. Poteet
Date: 12/22/2020 9:00:00 PM

Thank you, Eve, for your generous spirit this Christmas. May I wish you the same beautiful blessing of the season. We need more focus on the gifts of time and a listening ear.