Fear Minichu

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Fear Minuchi

Fear Some lose all mind and soul anticipating danger war's soldiers abound death its toll Shrieks moans and groans hopeless cries at hell's gate confound crushed bones God's sake dire trumpets sound wake! Some lose all mind and soul hopeless cries at hell's gate confound wake!

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Nancy Kaufman

Date: 9/18/2023 7:00:00 AM

This is such potent penning dear poetess. Enjoyed and best wished in the contest.

I Am Anaya
Date: 9/18/2023 1:35:00 PM

Thank you, Nancy! Delightful you enjoyed.

Silent One

Date: 9/17/2023 6:12:00 AM

You described it very well.. we can only overcome our fear by facing it...that last stanza says a lot.. great minchu.

I Am Anaya
Date: 9/17/2023 9:24:00 PM

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/17/2023 1:43:00 PM

I agree. Fear thrives in darkness. We must face our individual and collective fears. My soap box.

I Am Anaya
Date: 9/17/2023 12:51:00 PM

Thank you, SO! We've been awake now for a time. It's now a dream we need to wake from. "

Speaks Volumes

Date: 9/16/2023 8:28:00 PM

Terrific Minichu my friend. I feel sorry for Mohan Your fear is so real. Its really terrific and you are one of three that I have said that to today.. I love this one. Its excellent

Speaks Volumes
Date: 9/18/2023 3:57:00 PM

I just read them all again.. I think you have it! It definitely stands out a whisker above all other entries.

I Am Anaya
Date: 9/16/2023 9:49:00 PM

In fear of war SV a serious subject. I've been listening to worldly news, well just thinking how bad things get quickly. On the other hand, no one wants it! Thank you! I'm glad you like this one.:)