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Fear Above Me

sharp talons descend
brother rabbit runs from fear
frozen teardrops red

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Date: 12/16/2009 6:58:00 PM
great words in your Haiku Jimbo.. poor little guy ..could see the terror and no where to escape... alas the circle of life... enjoyed ... blessings... luv... Linda-Marie...
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Date: 9/21/2009 4:20:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us James. As always I wish you the best in your future writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/20/2009 9:31:00 PM
Nicely written Haiku, very descriptive of nature in the animal kingdom. Awesome creation. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your comments on my poems. Caroline.
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Date: 9/20/2009 4:51:00 PM
Your Haiku is masterpiece vivid here James, God job brother, Sincerely Moses
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Date: 9/20/2009 10:11:00 AM
Wonderful Haiku James!! Thank you also for your recent comments on my recall..made me smile to find a kindred soul! ;-) ~Trudy~
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Date: 9/20/2009 6:16:00 AM
frozen teardrops red-ow Jim pls no red eyes with tears,no frozen hearts,no fear--so sad dear,sorry didnt see it before--Charma
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Date: 9/20/2009 5:11:00 AM
This a scare me to death Haiku. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 9/20/2009 12:56:00 AM
Like the play on words in the title Jim.Thank you for your welcome comments today Rgds Brian
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Date: 9/19/2009 9:34:00 PM
Powerful imagery James, nice work...Raul
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