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Fear

reminiscing on a hair-raising experience I wipe my bald head © 30th August 2017

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Susan Ashley

Date: 12/9/2017 11:24:00 AM

Oh Paul, your clever and wonderful wit never fails to elicit a warm smile from my face or my heart. Your word play is superb my creative friend. Warmest wishes ~Susan

Susan Ashley
Date: 12/10/2017 2:54:00 PM

ohh Paul, I'm sorry to hear of your troubling situation. That's a major hassle to have to deal with and I thank you for taking a few moments to leave your precious thoughts.. ~warmest wishes

Paul Callus
Date: 12/10/2017 2:44:00 PM

Thank you Susan! This was meant to elicit a smile, so I'm pleased with your reaction. ~ Been busy mending a burst water pipe, and all the hassle that came with it! Having an early night ~ warm regards // paul

Janis Thompson

Date: 9/24/2017 9:45:00 PM

I love it Paul. I have to be careful not to lose my hair over things or I'll be doing that. A good senryu.

Paul Callus
Date: 9/25/2017 4:31:00 PM

I'm pleased that you found it to your liking, Janis....thank you! Regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/19/2017 6:54:00 PM

Now THAT is what I call a cleverly executed senryu!!

Paul Callus
Date: 9/20/2017 2:26:00 AM

Thank you, Andrea; your thumbs up is appreciated:) Regards // paul

Chris Hagy

Date: 9/17/2017 9:35:00 PM

Very cute and clever Paul...I try not to reminisce on those fearful experiences. Have great week :)

Paul Callus
Date: 9/18/2017 1:26:00 PM

Negative experiences are meant to be put aside, Chris, but sometimes they do come back to haunt us, especially in our dreams! Thank you for stopping by...and you have a lovely week, too:) Regards // paul

Lynn Marie

Date: 9/15/2017 11:14:00 PM

so clever, made me smile:) a great senryu Paul.

Paul Callus
Date: 9/16/2017 10:03:00 AM

I'm glad it made you smile, Lynn:) Warm regards // paul

Maria Williams

Date: 9/12/2017 6:13:00 PM

That fear induced reminiscing must have been bad to invoke a sweat. A great Senryu Paul. I love it....Maria

Paul Callus
Date: 9/16/2017 10:01:00 AM

Yes, it induced a sweat, but alas, no hair!! Thank you for your pleasant visit, Maria. Enjoy the weekend. Regards // paul

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 9/8/2017 3:11:00 PM

That is a good description of fear. Have a niice day my friend.

Paul Callus
Date: 9/10/2017 3:20:00 AM

Thank you Darlene; a nice day to you, too. Regards // paul

Heather Admire

Date: 9/5/2017 7:28:00 PM

Wow! You perfectly described how fear is for everyone. Good job!

Paul Callus
Date: 9/6/2017 5:27:00 AM

Thank you for stopping by, Heather; pleased to make your acquaintance. Regards // paul

Joanna Daniel

Date: 9/2/2017 10:07:00 AM

Ha ha, nice and clever one, Paul:)

Paul Callus
Date: 9/2/2017 10:15:00 AM

Thank you, Jo:) Regards // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/31/2017 12:57:00 PM

- :) ... well done, Paul - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus
Date: 9/2/2017 9:37:00 AM

Many thanks, Anne-Lise:) Have a nice day! Hugs // paul

Joseph May

Date: 8/30/2017 2:48:00 PM

I like the humor in this write Paul...Nicely done

Paul Callus
Date: 9/2/2017 9:33:00 AM

I missed out on the contest because it filled too fast, so I decided to write a humorous take on the 'fear' theme instead. Thank you for reading and commenting. Regards // paul

John Michaels

Date: 8/30/2017 1:18:00 PM

Clever write, Paul! All the best, John.

Paul Callus
Date: 9/2/2017 9:30:00 AM

Thank you, John. Best regards // paul