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Fear The shout of a man sitting at a table He was collecting all bottles, and glass that he was able I turned to my husband and said what do you think? Some guys stood behind us and said "lets get a drink." I moved to the side, I walked on past The hairs on my neck were standing up fast A feeling I knew washed over me Something was happening and I didn’t want to see. A guard with a gun, knocked me as he walked by The guy at the table with the bottles wasn’t shy. "Get lost, get away you can’t stop me flying I know what to do without even trying." My heart began to race, what is going on? People are pushing and shoving then we could see he had a gun. The fight starts there on the floor, two men with the glass and bottles Two guards rush in, hands round throats trying to throttle We hide behind tables, and chairs, we cannot escape A gun slides up near making a noise like ripping duck tape. It’s there at my feet- a hand reaches for it, Is it a guard or a terrorist? I nearly have a fit. A push in the back from a big burly guy Shouts “Go on get stuck in, give it a try.” "What the hell are you on about shut your mouth now" There’s guns flying round and words I never heard- I vow There are four on the floor kicking guns and screaming loud Then a clicking of two feet, comes a short man from the crowd He stands and he yells and they all do stop He points and picks up the guns that they have not He sorts it all out; the police come take them away An announcement rings out “Thanks for flying with us today.”
Based on a true event over thirty years ago in an airport in Gan Canary

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/13/2012 7:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your great win in Debbie Guzzi's "Fear" contest MaNDY. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/12/2012 6:34:00 PM
Very nice, Tammy. Congrats on your win. This was a delight.
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Samual Ronthorpe
Date: 2/12/2012 6:34:00 PM
Not Tammy, Mandy...Opps.
Date: 2/12/2012 1:52:00 AM
Mandy, congratulations... with your wonderful win In Debbie's contest.. enjoyed your the true deep even your poem was based on. have yourself a wonderful valentines~ always* xox~PD
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Date: 2/11/2012 8:48:00 PM
Well done Mandy on your super win with this fearful episode. Your words invoke the feelings with the scene. All the best with your Mum, too; she must be most proud of her daughter, Congratulations, Wordancer
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Date: 2/11/2012 8:03:00 PM
congrats Mandy on a super first place win for this dynamite write luv.. awesome one..
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Date: 2/11/2012 1:02:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Mandy. You have told quite a story very descriptively with good rhyming.
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Date: 2/11/2012 10:38:00 AM
Congrats on 1st place.........George
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Date: 2/11/2012 10:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win,Mandy!
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 2/11/2012 10:33:00 AM
Thank you Fabiyas I am so tempted to call you Fab xx
Date: 2/11/2012 9:55:00 AM
WOW, Mandy. I was SHACKLED to this, I couldn't read it fast enough. I am honoured to share top spot with you. Your very real and scary story had me riveted. Great write, I enjoyed reading this and again, I say, writers see and hear irony. The last line shines. Cheers and hugs, Cyndi and congrats on your well deserved win. PS- thanks for all your lovely comments on my poems. You're ever so sweet! :-)
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Date: 2/11/2012 8:42:00 AM
very engrossing way of putting it down ... congrads
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 2/11/2012 10:32:00 AM
Thanks Sashi xx
Date: 2/10/2012 10:03:00 PM
goosebumps and a great ride, mandy.. super cheers to you! :) huggs!
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Date: 2/10/2012 9:45:00 PM
Amazing poem, Mandy! Congrats on your big win!! Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 2/10/2012 6:06:00 PM
Great tale Mandy so glad to see you win big! Do The happy dance! Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 2/10/2012 6:04:00 PM
brilliant, i couldnt stop reading
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Date: 2/10/2012 4:53:00 PM
Congratulations on a great write and a great win in the contest. Jon
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Date: 2/10/2012 3:56:00 PM
Congrats on this first place win, Mandy. Wow. Gwendolen
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Date: 2/9/2012 10:52:00 AM
well Mandy, i believe i've just read the winning poem, in the fear contest. tou tell this so realistic, one is transformed right to there.awesome poem. harry
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