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Faults and Weakness

Traveling through a forest Within I saw faults, weakness There’s a definite pain found From thoughts seen inside Russell Sivey Entrant into Brian Strand's "UPTO FIFTEEN" contest 1/28/2012

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Tim B

Date: 1/29/2012 9:25:00 PM

Loved this much, so true that when we travel through the forests of our souls and our minds that we find many faults and weakness, but there in lies the difference of perception; a weakness is simply a strength waiting to be forged, pain is simply a measure of experience and well faults? Leave them to the earth my friend. Very well written and very witty poem, a winner I think, so good luck to you as always.

John Loving Iii

Date: 1/29/2012 8:52:00 PM

Pollution?

Don Johnson

Date: 1/29/2012 7:44:00 PM

look into the depth of passion, feel the pain depart as heat, cast out the pain your ration, drive it out, still hit's delete.... then format the disk:) thank you Russell.....Don

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/28/2012 9:50:00 PM

Russell, great movement... only one knows whats inside and the lenght ..enjoyed stopping by tonight..pd

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/28/2012 8:06:00 PM

For me, this has something to do with "can't see the forest for the trees." Did I get that right? hmmm, no that is not quite it. But I do not think it is about nature!! It seems deep like a woods!

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/28/2012 4:14:00 PM

Brian seems to like poems about nature. I hope he takes notice of this one. It is good for a dodoitsu.