Jesse Rowe Poet Limerick

Fatso

They said how she ate was absurd;
A "Fatso", they called her she heard,
And ever since then
That poor, baby wren
Just pecked at her food like a bird.

8.31.18
Contest: Any Animal or Creature Limerick

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Valerie Staton January 27, 2019 at 6:47 AM Nice!

Mahtab Bangalee September 18, 2018 at 10:12 PM Excellent limerick- packed at her food like a bird- nice fun

Darlene De Beaulieu September 18, 2018 at 5:49 PM Hello Jesse, I love your poem it is so cute. I smiled as I red. have a nice evening my friend. Jesse Rowe September 18, 2018 at 7:06 PM Thank you. Hope you have a nice evening yourself.

Sara Kendrick September 18, 2018 at 10:18 AM I have read your humorous short work and wanted to say congrats on your win ..Way to go.. Sara Jesse Rowe September 18, 2018 at 12:32 PM Thank you for your comment.

Andrea Dietrich September 13, 2018 at 3:50 PM this was SO cute. like a bird. That was quite clever!!! FAVE

Line Gauthier September 13, 2018 at 12:13 AM Kids can be so mean! Good limerick, Jesse.

Charles Messina September 12, 2018 at 11:36 AM This is great, Jesse. Congratulations on your win and thanks for entering my contest...Charlie Jesse Rowe September 12, 2018 at 5:02 PM Thank you. This was a fun contest. Thank you for the placement.

Gershon Wolf September 3, 2018 at 9:09 PM Three thumbs up, Jesse! (I'm all thumbs). :) gw

Rico Leffanta August 31, 2018 at 4:33 PM Perfect photo to go with your limerick! Well done! Aloha! Rico Jesse Rowe August 31, 2018 at 7:08 PM A happy find when I Googled "Fat Wren". Aloha.

Chris Green August 31, 2018 at 9:25 AM That was cute Jesse. Nicely done. Jesse Rowe August 31, 2018 at 7:07 PM Thank you.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart August 31, 2018 at 8:34 AM Awesome!!! This bird nerd's voting for you ;) In fact, I have to fave it. Good luck in the contest Jesse! xomo Jesse Rowe August 31, 2018 at 8:56 AM Many thanks, Maureen. Much appreciated.