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Fatso

They said how she ate was absurd; A "Fatso", they called her she heard, And ever since then That poor, baby wren Just pecked at her food like a bird. 8.31.18 Contest: Any Animal or Creature Limerick

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Date: 1/27/2019 6:47:00 AM
Nice!
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Date: 9/18/2018 10:12:00 PM
Excellent limerick- packed at her food like a bird- nice fun
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Date: 9/18/2018 5:49:00 PM
Hello Jesse, I love your poem it is so cute. I smiled as I red. have a nice evening my friend.
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Jesse Rowe
Date: 9/18/2018 7:06:00 PM
Thank you. Hope you have a nice evening yourself.
Date: 9/18/2018 10:18:00 AM
I have read your humorous short work and wanted to say congrats on your win ..Way to go.. Sara
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Jesse Rowe
Date: 9/18/2018 12:32:00 PM
Thank you for your comment.
Date: 9/13/2018 3:50:00 PM
this was SO cute. like a bird. That was quite clever!!! FAVE
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Date: 9/13/2018 12:13:00 AM
Kids can be so mean! Good limerick, Jesse.
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Date: 9/12/2018 11:36:00 AM
This is great, Jesse. Congratulations on your win and thanks for entering my contest...Charlie
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Jesse Rowe
Date: 9/12/2018 5:02:00 PM
Thank you. This was a fun contest. Thank you for the placement.
Date: 9/3/2018 9:09:00 PM
Three thumbs up, Jesse! (I'm all thumbs). :) gw
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Date: 8/31/2018 4:33:00 PM
Perfect photo to go with your limerick! Well done! Aloha! Rico
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Jesse Rowe
Date: 8/31/2018 7:08:00 PM
A happy find when I Googled "Fat Wren". Aloha.
Date: 8/31/2018 9:25:00 AM
That was cute Jesse. Nicely done.
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Jesse Rowe
Date: 8/31/2018 7:07:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 8/31/2018 8:34:00 AM
Awesome!!! This bird nerd's voting for you ;) In fact, I have to fave it. Good luck in the contest Jesse! xomo
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Jesse Rowe
Date: 8/31/2018 8:56:00 AM
Many thanks, Maureen. Much appreciated.