Father's Gift

I've seen my father in my dreams
and traveled to where, it seems,
he is still composing verse
and, happily, we converse. 

His poetry plays in my head.
I wake, in haste, jump out of bed
and quickly jot down what was said.
My father is alive, not dead!

He lives in all my poetry.
He'll always be a part of me.
No one can take away his light
as long as I continue to write.


November 30, 2018
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Smith Avatar
July 6, 2024 at 12:17 AM
Added to my faves :) … I feel like I’d write the same thing!
Duraiswami  Avatar
July 5, 2024 at 9:37 AM
An absolute beauty of a poem, nostalgic, nuanced and well rhymed. Excellent poem; the others in this collection are equally brilliant.
Warlov Avatar
November 2, 2019 at 11:18 PM
It's simple and true to its voice, which is quite an accomplishment. These short pieces can be harder to produce than they appear. Thanks RW
Barden Avatar
June 27, 2019 at 4:41 AM
Amen! Wonderfully sweet and poignant, my friend ... please DO continue writing, and please return to the Soup! Blessings! :o) <3
One Avatar
December 1, 2018 at 11:15 AM
Thank you Janece, I am not on here very much to be honest.. Life is busy..
Godwin Avatar
November 30, 2018 at 8:23 PM
We are both Father miss-ers, and while Dad did not write, he is often the topic of my poetry. I was just talking about that with my brother, I have written so many about him since he made his transition. Do you think our Dads know? This touched me on a personal level and I'm putting it into my favs. So glad you wrote this. All the best ... CayCay
Godwin Avatar
November 30, 2018 at 8:26 PM
I clicked off and it dawned on me that you might relate to my poem, 'Christmas Mourning' because it is very much a Daddy poem. If you're interested, no biggy. Be well, Janece
One Avatar
November 30, 2018 at 5:09 PM
Wow Janece this poem resonates with me, because i always see my father in my dreams... I see you have not posted in a long time..
Terry Avatar
November 30, 2018 at 5:28 PM
Just came back to post this poem and check on you and a couple others. So many poets gone. I'm glad to find you still here and as accomplished as ever. Happy Holidays.
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