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Father's Gift

I've seen my father in my dreams and traveled to where, it seems, he is still composing verse and, happily, we converse. His poetry plays in my head. I wake, in haste, jump out of bed and quickly jot down what was said. My father is alive, not dead! He lives in all my poetry. He'll always be a part of me. No one can take away his light as long as I continue to write. November 30, 2018

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Date: 11/2/2019 11:18:00 PM
It's simple and true to its voice, which is quite an accomplishment. These short pieces can be harder to produce than they appear. Thanks RW
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Date: 6/27/2019 4:41:00 AM
Amen! Wonderfully sweet and poignant, my friend ... please DO continue writing, and please return to the Soup! Blessings! :o) <3
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Date: 12/1/2018 11:15:00 AM
Thank you Janece, I am not on here very much to be honest.. Life is busy..
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Date: 11/30/2018 8:23:00 PM
We are both Father miss-ers, and while Dad did not write, he is often the topic of my poetry. I was just talking about that with my brother, I have written so many about him since he made his transition. Do you think our Dads know? This touched me on a personal level and I'm putting it into my favs. So glad you wrote this. All the best ... CayCay
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 11/30/2018 8:26:00 PM
I clicked off and it dawned on me that you might relate to my poem, 'Christmas Mourning' because it is very much a Daddy poem. If you're interested, no biggy. Be well, Janece
Date: 11/30/2018 5:09:00 PM
Wow Janece this poem resonates with me, because i always see my father in my dreams... I see you have not posted in a long time..
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Jan Terry
Date: 11/30/2018 5:28:00 PM
Just came back to post this poem and check on you and a couple others. So many poets gone. I'm glad to find you still here and as accomplished as ever. Happy Holidays.

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