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Father’s Day 2024

A circle forms around Dad. His kids hold his smile and tears. Celebrations without Mom hard the first year. His eyes were closed…he was world’s away. Little by little, the faucet turns off. His eyes like a Christmas ornament sparkle. He, now, holds a picture of Mom close to his heart. No one can touch this private space. It holds all his fond memories. All that is left over belongs to us. His kids circle around him. We have his back. He was left behind, but not, nearly, alone.

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Date: 6/21/2024 1:57:00 PM
This was very nicely expressed. I think you would really like my poem She Whispered "I Love you". Keep the faith. Mark
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/21/2024 2:11:00 PM
Aww…I would I would! <3
Date: 6/20/2024 8:58:00 PM
This is a beautiful celebration of Father's Day, though it is without your Mom. Despite the children being around, the loss of his dear partner, your Dad can't still reckon with. It is so natural. Still he has drowned his sorrow in the company of his children. The sentiments expressed are so sincere. Have a great weekend dear Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/21/2024 2:11:00 PM
We’ve had a few occasions where he’s actually laughed! :) Thank you, Valsa!
Date: 6/20/2024 12:05:00 PM
Kim, very touching remembrance of loss and how to support those in grief as well as letting people have their space.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/20/2024 7:06:00 PM
Thank you, Duke!
Date: 6/17/2024 2:56:00 PM
Beautiful...this was my first Father's Day without my dad, hope he's happy, whole, wherever he is
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/20/2024 7:07:00 PM
Sorry for your loss. Firsts aren’t easy and having years pass isn’t easy but we are not alone in our loss. Hugs ~ Kim
Date: 6/17/2024 5:22:00 AM
so delicate feelings, you expressed Kim with your heart, remember my dad too, he passed away before mom, tough times to share, take care yann
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/17/2024 5:51:00 AM
I will, Yann. My heart goes out to you. I held my dad’s heart in my hands for over a year…the tears neverending…that does something to you. Hugs ~ Kim
Date: 6/16/2024 7:13:00 PM
It sure must be hard!! I think I'd be lost without my wife at this point in life. Heartfelt healing, Gershon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/16/2024 9:15:00 PM
I’ve got an inkling through see my Dad’s loss. Thank you, Gershon!
Date: 6/16/2024 2:04:00 PM
So heartfelt and lovely, Kim. We are going to my daughter's house soon for pizza for the dad's!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/16/2024 6:16:00 PM
Hope you had a great time! Thank you, Andrea!
Date: 6/16/2024 12:48:00 PM
A Happy Father's Day to your loving dad dear KIMMIE! XXX
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/16/2024 6:17:00 PM
Thank you, my wonderful friend! xxx
Date: 6/16/2024 11:06:00 AM
A wonderful poem.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/16/2024 6:17:00 PM
Thank you kindly!
Date: 6/16/2024 10:10:00 AM
It is beautiful that your have kept his space, sacred.. so many great memories for you... Lovely tribute for your dad..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/16/2024 6:17:00 PM
Thank you, Silent!
Date: 6/16/2024 8:42:00 AM
Both a wonderful tribute to your father for Father's Day and to your mother!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/16/2024 6:18:00 PM
Thank you, Karen! I am blessed. Hugs ~ Kim
Date: 6/16/2024 6:07:00 AM
The circle of love is so important and to remember who he was one with for so long. A beautiful snapshot of a special moment, Kim. Have a delightful day with joy and nostalgia mixed. SuZ
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/16/2024 6:50:00 AM
Thank you, SuZ! Have a wonderful day!

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