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Father’s Day 2024

A circle forms around Dad.
His kids hold his smile and tears.
Celebrations without Mom
hard the first year. His eyes
were closed…he was world’s away.
Little by little, the faucet turns off.
His eyes like a Christmas ornament
sparkle. He, now, holds a picture
of Mom close to his heart.
No one can touch this private space.
It holds all his fond memories.
All that is left over belongs to us.
His kids circle around him.
We have his back. He was left
behind, but not, nearly, alone.

Copyright © Kim Rodrigues | Year Posted 2024

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Mark J. Halliday Date: 6/21/2024 1:57:00 PM This was very nicely expressed. I think you would really like my poem She Whispered "I Love you". Keep the faith. Mark Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 6/21/2024 2:11:00 PM Aww…I would I would! <3

Valsa George Date: 6/20/2024 8:58:00 PM This is a beautiful celebration of Father's Day, though it is without your Mom. Despite the children being around, the loss of his dear partner, your Dad can't still reckon with. It is so natural. Still he has drowned his sorrow in the company of his children. The sentiments expressed are so sincere. Have a great weekend dear Kim. Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 6/21/2024 2:11:00 PM We’ve had a few occasions where he’s actually laughed! :) Thank you, Valsa!

Duke Beaufort Date: 6/20/2024 12:05:00 PM Kim, very touching remembrance of loss and how to support those in grief as well as letting people have their space. Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 6/20/2024 7:06:00 PM Thank you, Duke!

Paige Hind Date: 6/17/2024 2:56:00 PM Beautiful...this was my first Father's Day without my dad, hope he's happy, whole, wherever he is Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 6/20/2024 7:07:00 PM Sorry for your loss. Firsts aren’t easy and having years pass isn’t easy but we are not alone in our loss. Hugs ~ Kim

Yann Rolland Date: 6/17/2024 5:22:00 AM so delicate feelings, you expressed Kim with your heart, remember my dad too, he passed away before mom, tough times to share, take care yann Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 6/17/2024 5:51:00 AM I will, Yann. My heart goes out to you. I held my dad’s heart in my hands for over a year…the tears neverending…that does something to you. Hugs ~ Kim

Gershon Wolf Date: 6/16/2024 7:13:00 PM It sure must be hard!! I think I'd be lost without my wife at this point in life. Heartfelt healing, Gershon Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 6/16/2024 9:15:00 PM I’ve got an inkling through see my Dad’s loss. Thank you, Gershon!

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/16/2024 2:04:00 PM So heartfelt and lovely, Kim. We are going to my daughter's house soon for pizza for the dad's! Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 6/16/2024 6:16:00 PM Hope you had a great time! Thank you, Andrea!

Jack Ellison Date: 6/16/2024 12:48:00 PM A Happy Father's Day to your loving dad dear KIMMIE! XXX Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 6/16/2024 6:17:00 PM Thank you, my wonderful friend! xxx

Diane Christian Date: 6/16/2024 11:06:00 AM A wonderful poem. Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 6/16/2024 6:17:00 PM Thank you kindly!

Silent One Date: 6/16/2024 10:10:00 AM It is beautiful that your have kept his space, sacred.. so many great memories for you... Lovely tribute for your dad.. Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 6/16/2024 6:17:00 PM Thank you, Silent!

Karen Croft Date: 6/16/2024 8:42:00 AM Both a wonderful tribute to your father for Father's Day and to your mother! Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 6/16/2024 6:18:00 PM Thank you, Karen! I am blessed. Hugs ~ Kim

Suzanne Delaney Date: 6/16/2024 6:07:00 AM The circle of love is so important and to remember who he was one with for so long. A beautiful snapshot of a special moment, Kim. Have a delightful day with joy and nostalgia mixed. SuZ Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 6/16/2024 6:50:00 AM Thank you, SuZ! Have a wonderful day!