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Father-In-Law Cares

Love drips from his voice As he rang me out of bed ''Hope you guys are fine'' These words stream my soul To seconds of sweet silence I replied, so fine. Another dawn he'll call Spilling the same syllables In the same verse form. For Dr.Ram Mehta's contest: 'In-Laws' Joseph Osita

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John Freeman

Date: 6/8/2011 8:03:00 PM

Joseph, Great job on this honored presentation. Agape, Moses

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/8/2011 10:13:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram's contest Joseph. Love, Carol

Dinda Minardi

Date: 6/7/2011 8:29:00 AM

This is very sweet :). I guess in-laws can get credit too, right :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/6/2011 8:49:00 PM

I remember yours.It's so sweet. one of the best! congrats.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/6/2011 8:34:00 PM

hmmm, too much early morning love? or not enough? LOL congrad's on your win! [She is Daddies little girl ;)] Light & Love

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/6/2011 3:43:00 PM

congrats Joseph on your spectacular win in Dr. Ram's contest with another super write luv.. enjoy again and again..thankxx for all your sweet comments on my wins as well luv..

Gwendolen Song

Date: 6/6/2011 3:17:00 PM

Joseph- Therapeutic pause works well before u respond, huh? ha ha. NIce write for Dr. Ram's contest. Congrats on your high mark! Gwendolen

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/6/2011 3:11:00 PM

Congratulations on the fourth place win in my contest, Joseph

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/25/2011 7:36:00 PM

You are lucky to have such a caring father in law!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/25/2011 10:56:00 AM

I'm glad you have a good relationship with your father-in-law, Joseph. Great entry for Dr. Ram's contest! Wishing you success, my friend. Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/24/2011 12:44:00 PM

Please give once over to the spelling in the title, Joseph

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/24/2011 12:33:00 PM

Thanks for the entry, Joseph