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Father-in-law cares

Love drips from his voice As he rang me out of bed ''Hope you guys are fine'' These words stream my soul To seconds of sweet silence I replied, so fine. Another dawn he'll call Spilling the same syllables In the same verse form. For Dr.Ram Mehta's contest: 'In-Laws' Joseph Osita

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/8/2011 8:03:00 PM
Joseph, Great job on this honored presentation. Agape, Moses
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Date: 6/8/2011 10:13:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram's contest Joseph. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/7/2011 8:29:00 AM
This is very sweet :). I guess in-laws can get credit too, right :)
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Date: 6/6/2011 8:49:00 PM
I remember yours.It's so sweet. one of the best! congrats.
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Date: 6/6/2011 8:34:00 PM
hmmm, too much early morning love? or not enough? LOL congrad's on your win! [She is Daddies little girl ;)] Light & Love
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Date: 6/6/2011 3:43:00 PM
congrats Joseph on your spectacular win in Dr. Ram's contest with another super write luv.. enjoy again and again..thankxx for all your sweet comments on my wins as well luv..
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Date: 6/6/2011 3:17:00 PM
Joseph- Therapeutic pause works well before u respond, huh? ha ha. NIce write for Dr. Ram's contest. Congrats on your high mark! Gwendolen
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Date: 6/6/2011 3:11:00 PM
Congratulations on the fourth place win in my contest, Joseph
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Date: 5/25/2011 7:36:00 PM
You are lucky to have such a caring father in law!
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Date: 5/25/2011 10:56:00 AM
I'm glad you have a good relationship with your father-in-law, Joseph. Great entry for Dr. Ram's contest! Wishing you success, my friend. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/24/2011 12:44:00 PM
Please give once over to the spelling in the title, Joseph
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Date: 5/24/2011 12:33:00 PM
Thanks for the entry, Joseph
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