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You never see the tears I weep father on your mossy stone, Until we meet again in Heaven you are safe within my heart; We had a special bond, the perfect, father and daughter team, You believed in me, inspired me and was always proud. Oh I recall running into your open arms a little girl innocent, You were the first man I loved and will always be so special; The older I get, the smarter you seem to have been back then, My anchor, my rock, my protector, my security, my dad. Can I ever forget our walks hand in hand in the park and woods, You taught me to love nature and to see with eyes open; Hours we would sit on a park bench watching life drifting by, And I would ask you all kinds of silly little girl questions. Even in death you are my guiding light, my safe harbour in life, You left me suddenly and I never got to say I love you daddy; Tearfully I asked for your forgiveness as I held your cold hand, If I hurt you, sorry and I forgive you too for harsh words. No one is perfect, I know you always wanted the best for me, Being a father is a big job, never easy, and I was a stubborn; I knew everything by the age of thirteen, more than you, All your sayings now make so much sense to this girl. I remember bringing you hot cups of tea out to your workshop, Sitting beside you at your dusty, cobwebby work bench; Admiring your many rows and rows of tin cans and bottles, You were always asking mom for some kind of container. Mom said you kept every nail, screw or bolt you ever met, And I would add, and every board too, and we would laugh; It was me who cleaned out the workshop, oh stabbing pain, I lingered there for days touching things you touched. In my heart father, you are kept alive for always and forever, Never to be forgotten, no matter where I go in life; I will be your little girl for eternity and I will come to you, In falling rain, wind, snow, and on perfect summer days. Dear Lord, please take care of daddy until I get to Heaven, I brought you a dew-kissed yellow rose from my garden; Of all the flowers that mother grew, you loved these best, Laying it gently on your tomb, I turn away with pride. _______________________ September 12, 2015 Poetry/Verse/Father Copyright Protected, ID 15-708-884-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. For the contest, Stand By Your Man Ladies, sponsor, Silent One Third Place

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Date: 9/29/2015 6:37:00 PM
Congrats for your AWESOME pen BW! ;-)
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Date: 9/28/2015 10:55:00 PM
Broken Wings congratulations!
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Date: 9/28/2015 10:23:00 PM
Broken, Congratulations on your win. Forever **SKAT**"
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Date: 9/26/2015 3:31:00 PM
In these beautifully worded lines Wings, you have outlined your life history with your dad! Touching! Congrats on your win! Balveen
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Date: 9/26/2015 2:06:00 AM
Wonderful tribute to ur dad broken! Congrats on superb win!
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Date: 9/25/2015 9:39:00 PM
BW, I remember reading this moving to piece to your father. I moved me tears. Congratulations on your heartfelt tribute to your father it was well deserved::-)Alexis
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Date: 9/25/2015 11:06:00 AM
I barely have words. Emotion is between every word and every line especially, I think, for all 'little girls' who have lost their Fathers. One must pause after the read, and that is where I am - in pause ... CayCay
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Date: 9/25/2015 10:30:00 AM
Such a beautiful and devoted tribute to your dear father, Broken. I share your feelings about the place your father had and still has in your heart...as you can see in my latest poem posted. Very beautifully expressed, Broken. Congratulations on your high win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 9/25/2015 10:01:00 AM
Back to congratulate you on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 9/25/2015 6:44:00 AM
wow, you have brought me teary eyed again, beautiful tribute...hugs
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Date: 9/14/2015 1:57:00 PM
Beautiful poem. It touches me. So very much.
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Date: 9/14/2015 11:53:00 AM
Your daddy knew you loved him. My eyes are misted Constance thinking of my two girls( they are 10 years apart)....the first part of this reminds me of the things I do with my youngest and the stubbornness of you reminds me of my soon to be 16 year old. But I love them both dearly as your father must have of you.
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Date: 9/13/2015 3:06:00 PM
You finished it! Awesome work. Hugs Eve
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Date: 9/13/2015 11:31:00 AM
wow bw, I truly envy you....because there are too many of us who never go through....anything remotely close to a fatherly bond....and for that, your words are Beautifully beyond....;)
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Date: 9/13/2015 10:16:00 AM
a loving dedication to a man who loved you unconditionally, constance... so tenderly written!..huggs
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Date: 9/13/2015 10:07:00 AM
The magic that exist in your life is personified in the closeness you feel with your father and this is skillfully incorporated into a beautiful and unique poem honoring your father. Emile. #7
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Date: 9/12/2015 2:26:00 PM
- A wonderful write B.W. - beautiful words about a loving father (one 7 for you gave me tears in my eyes) - Best wishes and a beautiful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/12/2015 11:53:00 AM
BW, l came back to make sure I gave you a 7 for such an amazing write:-)Alexis
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Date: 9/12/2015 11:51:00 AM
BW, your words of love for your father, touched my heart immensely. In the midst of your verse the tears started to flow. From one daughter to another daughter, you have penned a well written tribute to your father. You got yourself a winner with this piece. Good luck in the contest:-) Alexis
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Date: 9/12/2015 7:51:00 AM
I wake up to a beautiful sunny Saturday with a fresh cup of joe and now I have to wait for the mist to clear from my eyes Constance to see the days radiance after reading this tear jerker! Great write dear poet...have a wonderful weekend....much love, james
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Date: 9/12/2015 7:31:00 AM
This is a lovely tribute Broken Wings I wish I had had this sort of relationship with my father:-( Good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/12/2015 2:20:00 AM
hmm, wondering what you are up to, constance... thanks for my placement in your contest; much appreciated... still having tech problems.. huggs
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Date: 9/11/2015 6:57:00 PM
let me know when you have finished it - love the image!:-) hugs jan xx
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