Fates Footfalls

FATES FOOTFALLS

fate’s footfalls - the bull’s running.
i hear the sound of a stampede
at my ankles. the rush of blood
pulsing through my veins, hammering
my heart, quite like a silver spike
penetration of a vampiric scream.

(my bedclothes sweating. i turn)

darkness on a crisp Winter’s eve.
snow’s falling...i see their shape,
and then his eyes, like icy daggers.
i’m walking with increasing speed
but the sound of heavy steps following
… breathing on my neck. i fall

(like a cliff, i hang off my bed)

fooling fate, i wake up to a sunny day.
i wash the panic off my face. i run
all day long, never noticing footprints,
the same width, same length, the odor
of rotten eggs, and the black hood
that fades in and out. i rub my eyes

as death drops his ax…

(i know i won’t wake up)

3/11/2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
March 26, 2018 at 10:33 PM
Back with congrats, Kim. Well done.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 26, 2018 at 10:36 PM
Thanks, Line!
Lawless Avatar
March 21, 2018 at 8:32 AM
Oh Kim, the reality of "fate" creeping into your dreams. Wonderfully done. I really like the parenthetical asides "gasping" between stanza....thanks for participating in the contest
Rodrigues Avatar
March 21, 2018 at 6:48 PM
Thank you so much!
Hoffman Avatar
March 13, 2018 at 7:17 PM
Very scary imagery in this well written poem Kim..Good luck in the contest!~Che :)
Rodrigues Avatar
March 13, 2018 at 7:39 PM
Thank you, Che!
Cunningham Avatar
March 13, 2018 at 2:41 PM
Great verse Kim, those dreams where the scene keeps changing spooks you when you wake up. If you wake up lol
Rodrigues Avatar
March 13, 2018 at 2:48 PM
For sure!
Gentile Avatar
March 13, 2018 at 11:56 AM
I love this one, Kim I think you may still wake up!!! xxoo
Rodrigues Avatar
March 13, 2018 at 11:57 AM
Thanks :):)
Gauthier Avatar
March 13, 2018 at 10:50 AM
Wow - very rich poem in imagery and mood. Superbly done, Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 13, 2018 at 11:53 AM
Thanks, Line!
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