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Fate and Footfall

Fate’s Footfalls

Fatima climbed up the spiral Minaret’s stairwell a
	case of mathematical precision a fountain of courage

One step at a time with geometric accuracy she 
	counted the odds and the even the skewed surface of life

Prime location primordial instinct as she stopped 
	a prime number of paces arresting her timid ascent

All her life she had wanted to be a muezzin an equal
	opportunity seeker of the one God that had not forsaken her

From top of her lungs at the spike of towering doubt she called
	resolved to throw down her veil and the gauntlet into the fold

A haunted expression portrayed a colonized mind but the
	shackles fell Galilei ready to ensure flight or redemption

An ultimate breath away from salvation she slipped on a marvel
	rolled the sole and her beautiful soul on a bright mindful marble

One foot dangling in the sky but the other fell through the floor
	encased her survival draped in the name of fate’s liberation

Tense in suspension balanced however she aligned her palms
	upside down and the horizon of destiny reassembled her faith

Fatima’s story lives on as the legend narrates the meaning of trust
	beyond questions now that she honestly knows the parapets’ calling


06th March 2018 written for contest Fate’s Footfall

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 3/7/2018 8:38:00 PM
A wonderful story on Fate. Good luck in the contest Kai....Maria
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 3/8/2018 3:21:00 AM
Thank you Maria. Water is the source of mind and soul...
Date: 3/6/2018 1:29:00 PM
An excellent poetic narration of fate and faith, Kai. Regards // paul
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 3/7/2018 6:04:00 AM
Thank you Paul. We need faith, trust and hope.
Date: 3/6/2018 11:58:00 AM
Great story telling Kai, best wishes in the contest...
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 3/7/2018 6:04:00 AM
Thank you Charlie. Hope dies last. But then it does not when we trust...
Date: 3/6/2018 7:10:00 AM
A most enjoyable read, Kai. Well done.
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 3/7/2018 6:07:00 AM
Thank you Line. The pen must paint pictures. Otherwise it dries up. Kai
Date: 3/6/2018 6:40:00 AM
A well articulated story of fate..I like the description that paints a picture for the reader..best for a win, Kai.
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 3/7/2018 6:07:00 AM
Pictures painted colour in clarity...Many wishes, Kai

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