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Impassive and exact is fate from your moment’s birth till your end. Even if you try to agitate your life’s event, fate will not bend. You will face trials, big or small. Impassive and exact is fate. You are what you are. God knows all that you will do with earth’s estate. . . Which gifts you’ll use; who’ll be your mate; how many lovers you will choose. Impassive and exact is fate. Nobody else walks in your shoes Some souls have fortune; some great woes. With good or evil hearts, all wait their time to leave here. So it goes . . . Impassive and exact is fate. Feb. 18, 2023 for Writing Challenge -F Words Poetry Contest Word chosen is number 10: Fate Sponsor: Constance La France

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Date: 2/22/2023 1:37:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being on Constance's winners' list. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 2/22/2023 10:12:00 AM
The face of emotionless fate takes shape in your poetic words Andrea. Indeed fate itself makes no judgements. Congratulations on your win. Continued prayers and blessings!
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Date: 2/21/2023 9:23:00 AM
Andrea, a wonderful poem and congratulations on your win my Writing Challenge - F Words, well done, blessings, Constance
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Date: 2/20/2023 8:55:00 PM
"Impassive and exact is fate." So very correct ! A beautiful poem written in Quatern form. Congratulations Andrea on your win !
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Date: 2/20/2023 6:27:00 PM
This is perfectly beautiful Andrea! Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 2/20/2023 5:16:00 PM
Congrats!!! Great read!! Exact-ly:)
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Date: 2/18/2023 10:35:00 AM
Great inspiring poem, very true indeed , I got tired of fighting against God and finally just gave up, my will is no good: ). May God bless, comfort, guide and fill you with His peace, love, spirit and joy in abundance
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