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Fascination

Oh, moon*, you're indeed a great fascination source Drawing me nigh toward milky way's truth-out pours Enthralling my heart for lofty adventure doors To solve various enigmas of celestial course. With your mysterious, wondrous transforming phases Moon, you truly delight my bewildered senses; Yet as a child, I have learned that your change-causes Are being moved by One stronger than all forces.
*Psalm 136:9 The moon and stars to rule by night: for his mercy endureth for ever. May 3, 2019 3rd place, "Free verse or Rhyme" Poetry Contest Sponsored by Eve Roper; judged on Yes 5/4/2019

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Date: 5/6/2019 4:50:00 AM
A beautiful articulation rendered, nice one!
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Date: 5/5/2019 7:10:00 PM
Beata, congratulations on your win and thank you for entering my contest. Come and visit my Blog.. Hugs Eve
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Date: 5/5/2019 1:47:00 PM
this one portrays a child with very deep thoughts! Congrats for your win, Beata.
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Date: 5/5/2019 1:10:00 PM
- Congratulations on your 3rd place in the contest, Beata :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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