Farewell

Farewell makes my heart bleeds But for our dear Lord, go…lead I’m not forcing you to stay Hope I’ll see you again someday I believe farewell is for your welfare For your dream, ‘though quite unfair I let you go if you follow your heart See you soon in church, sweetheart July 13, 2022 10.25pm FAREWELL theme rhyming contest Contest Judged: 7/13/2022 7:18:00 PM Sponsored by: Lisa YY Place 3 (out of 5 multi-w & hm)

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Barbara Barry-Nishanian

Date: 8/7/2022 1:19:00 AM

Congrats! Very touching.

Len Gasun
Date: 8/7/2022 6:27:00 AM

Thank you so much my dear friend Barbara for reading my poem, your kind words and congratulatory greetings. God bless. Hugs

Paghunda Zahid

Date: 7/25/2022 10:27:00 AM

That's a beautiful write... Very well penned. Stay blessed

Len Gasun
Date: 8/6/2022 7:33:00 AM

Thank you so much for reading my poem and your uplifting comments my dear friend Paghunda. Stay blessed too and God bless. Hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/14/2022 1:12:00 PM

so CUTE. Congrats, Len

Len Gasun
Date: 7/14/2022 6:12:00 PM

Thank you so much for your uplifting comments and your congrats greetings my dear friend Andrea. Blessings. Hugs

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/14/2022 8:49:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A lovely yet sad story/write. Have a great/blessed day writing away.................

Len Gasun
Date: 7/14/2022 6:13:00 PM

Thank you so much my dear friend Paula for your uplifting comments and your congratulatory greetings. Blessings. Hugs

Sotto Poet

Date: 7/14/2022 4:06:00 AM

Len, my sincere congratulations go out to you on your win. Having to say goodbye to loved ones is usually a difficult experience. Blessings

Len Gasun
Date: 7/14/2022 6:15:00 PM

Thank you so much my dear friend Sotto Poet for your uplifting comments and your sincere congratulatory greetings. You're right friend, goodbye is the most difficult experience, a heartbreaking one. Blessings. Hugs

Valsa George

Date: 7/14/2022 3:09:00 AM

Bidding farewell to loved ones is always a pain. Congratulations on your win dear friend Len.....

Len Gasun
Date: 7/14/2022 6:16:00 PM

You're right my dear. Thanks for your uplifting comments and congratulatory greetings my dear friend, Valsa. Blessings. Hugs

Sam Kauffman

Date: 7/13/2022 11:17:00 AM

So pensive and so real Len. There is such a sense of longing tinged with hope! Best wishes for the contest. Sending you blessings!

Len Gasun
Date: 7/13/2022 10:05:00 PM

Thank you so much my dear friend Sam for your visit, sharing your precious time to read my work and your uplifting comments. Thanks for the blessings. Sending them back to you. God bless you always. Hugs