Farewell, Forever

Door slammed in your face Ground shakes beneath... you tremble ~ Personal earthquake

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 8/13/2019 11:06:00 PM

I guess this might be what it would be like. I really have no idea. You have penned it well.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/14/2019 12:46:00 PM

Sounds like you've avoided this particular earthquake! :) gw

Susan Ashley

Date: 8/13/2019 6:50:00 PM

Oh the quaking of emotional and physical hurt and pain is vividly captured in your impactful haiku, Gershon. Potent poetry. Warmest wishes always my wonderful friend.. ~Susan

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/13/2019 8:58:00 PM

When you feel this way, Susan, I know that I have achieved a measure of success. Thank you so much. Best wishes, Gershon

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/13/2019 4:50:00 PM

Those shockwaves stay with you forever. Tom

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/13/2019 5:58:00 PM

They (those shockwaves) never do leave you, do they? ~ gw

Line Gauthier

Date: 8/13/2019 3:59:00 PM

Well captured emotions of shock, hurt and aftershock, Gershon. Loved it.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/13/2019 5:57:00 PM

Thanks for your support for this haiku, Line. :) gw

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 8/13/2019 3:58:00 PM

So powerful, personal earthquakes shake the most!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/13/2019 5:57:00 PM

Yes, and they're not milkshakes either. ~ gw