Fare Well

my vanishing hopes- ethereal ebbs the tide, on rocks my love rides

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/22/2010 8:47:00 AM

Wonderful words in your Haiku Brian.. good luck in Raul's awesome contest ..those photos are immensely inspirational to all of us entering the contest..luv.. Linda-Marie..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/21/2010 9:50:00 PM

I think you did well with that picture, Brian. Good luck in the contest. LUv, Andrea

Constance La France

Date: 2/21/2010 12:31:00 PM

I really like it, Brian, you are a romantic... lovely, best of luck in the contest...

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/21/2010 8:01:00 AM

Ahh...a new way of looking at this...with a sad heart. Well done!

Skat A

Date: 2/21/2010 1:52:00 AM

THIS IS GREAT .I WISH I COULD WRITE A HAIKU.. NEVER HAVE WRITTEN ONE BEFORE...THIS IS VERY BEAUTIFUL....IRMA

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 2/21/2010 12:56:00 AM

Hi Brian. Nice haiku. Good luck in Raul's contest. Love, Iolanda