Faraway Moon

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Faraway moon as a young child I could see your smile taste your cheese see your old man touch you with my finger Fascinating moon as a young adult I could sense your pull bathe in your romantic beams pledge my love reach for the stars! Most faithful moon in my waning years as life's orbit decays I am in awe of your loyalty amazed by your true colors reassured by your changing tides Continue to reflect life's light as other young children see your beautiful smile taste your curious cheese see your kind old man touch you with their imagination... Continue to inspire us as other young people, sense your magnetic pull luxuriate in your romantic beams pledge their undying love explore the universe! Most faithful, fascinating, faraway moon *** 10/18/2019 Photo by Susan Cipriano at Pixabay

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Line Gauthier

Date: 8/11/2020 4:19:00 PM

I am also in awe of the moon's loyalty. Last night I saw a moon like I had never seen. It was orange in color and looked like an orange sliver!! It actually looked like it had rind and the inside part was strangely textured. Of course, my camera could not capture the details. Lovely and well deserved tribute to the moon ~

Mark Toney
Date: 8/11/2020 8:32:00 PM