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Far, Too Far Away

It is the thing I can’t forget, When last I saw her face— Is was porcelain, as if a doll, Her gown, it was of lace. Her hair was as the chestnut burr; Her lips were as Merlot— Her eyes were blue as sapphire, With a kind of sadness, though. I saw her last beneath the moon, Though she was far away— And yet I thought she would return, Having found her smile, and stay. And still I hear her footsteps, For my mind deceives me so— About the sill I hear her voice, Should the wind decide to blow. How sad it is, her leaving, Whether by the moon, or day— Since for all my make-believing... She is far, too far away!

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Date: 8/18/2019 11:04:00 AM
another mysterious write that i find to be hauntingly beautiful~ great write, you do rhyme so well...it's the one thing i struggle most to write! nicely done :)
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Kenneth R. Merrill
Date: 9/8/2019 12:55:00 PM
Hi Sandra, and thank you so much. And isn’t it funny? I struggle with free verse. I hear in rhyme, and so I write. Thank you again ;-)
Date: 7/28/2019 10:29:00 AM
Hi Georgia! I hope you’re enjoying a pleasant weekend, and thank you for comment—a balm unto a writer’s soul. Best wishes, Georgia ;o) —Ken
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Date: 7/25/2019 7:12:00 AM
Nicely written Kenneth
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