Far, Too Far Away

It is the thing I can’t forget,
When last I saw her face—
Is was porcelain, as if a doll,
Her gown, it was of lace.

Her hair was as the chestnut burr;
Her lips were as Merlot—
Her eyes were blue as sapphire,
With a kind of sadness, though.

I saw her last beneath the moon,
Though she was far away—
And yet I thought she would return,
Having found her smile, and stay.

And still I hear her footsteps,
For my mind deceives me so—
About the sill I hear her voice,
Should the wind decide to blow.

How sad it is, her leaving,
Whether by the moon, or day—
Since for all my make-believing...
She is far, too far away!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Adams Avatar
August 18, 2019 at 11:04 AM
another mysterious write that i find to be hauntingly beautiful~ great write, you do rhyme so well...it's the one thing i struggle most to write! nicely done :)
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September 8, 2019 at 12:55 PM
Hi Sandra, and thank you so much. And isn’t it funny? I struggle with free verse. I hear in rhyme, and so I write. Thank you again ;-)
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July 28, 2019 at 10:29 AM
Hi Georgia! I hope you’re enjoying a pleasant weekend, and thank you for comment—a balm unto a writer’s soul. Best wishes, Georgia ;o) —Ken
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July 25, 2019 at 7:12 AM
Nicely written Kenneth
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