Far Away

I dream of the old house, five thousand miles
away, across the sea, high on the hill,
the garden where the rhododendrons shade
the black and white tiled steps up to the door.

I enter, walk from room to room, and see
my mother on the balcony; she sits
beneath the tumbling vines and reads her book.
My dad is in his study playing chess.

The house smells like it always did. Each thing
still lives in its accustomed place. This is
 a journey back in time: I am a child, 
was gone a little while and now am home. 

The light falls through the windows differently.
The trees have grown, obscure the view, and hide
The house from outside glance. Mom’s hair is white,
And father walks the stairs with halting steps.

I hope there will still be a few more years
For me to make this journey. Far away
Are home and childhood, and the church bells toll
The hours relentlessly. 

7/11/2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Gauthier Avatar
November 12, 2018 at 4:15 PM
Back with congrats on your win, Agnes.
Krampe Avatar
November 12, 2018 at 5:05 PM
Thank you, Line.
Doll Avatar
November 12, 2018 at 2:54 PM
Congratulations on your first place win, Agnes. Well deserved!
Krampe Avatar
November 12, 2018 at 5:03 PM
Thank you, Warren.
Gauthier Avatar
August 6, 2018 at 10:20 PM
A heartfelt read, beautifully penned, Agnes.
Wood Avatar
August 30, 2017 at 10:08 AM
Wonderful Agnes! What a great feeling of nostalgia in this piece. Congratulations!
Kimathi Avatar
August 30, 2017 at 4:53 AM
Congrats Agnes, for your well-deserved first placement with this awesome piece!! ;-)
Mandani Avatar
August 29, 2017 at 7:04 PM
Very nice.
Canerdy Avatar
August 29, 2017 at 5:10 PM
Absolutely beautiful--my newest favorite, Agnes. congrats!
Johnson Avatar
August 29, 2017 at 3:56 PM
Congrats agnes
Sands Avatar
August 29, 2017 at 3:38 PM
Congratulations Agnes :)
Cozart Avatar
August 29, 2017 at 2:15 PM
Beautiful. Congrats on your win.
Turner Avatar
July 12, 2017 at 12:25 PM
Be it ever so humble... Heartwarming write, Mrs Agnes.
Krampe Avatar
July 13, 2017 at 6:15 PM
Thank you, Daniel.
Makama Avatar
July 12, 2017 at 9:39 AM
This is beautiful... Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful.... I need to drop to your next page. Brilliant!
Krampe Avatar
July 13, 2017 at 6:14 PM
Thanks, Funom.
Gupta Avatar
July 12, 2017 at 7:54 AM
You took us to an altogether different world, Agnes ... a deep peace for a few minutes ...
Krampe Avatar
July 13, 2017 at 6:14 PM
Thank you, Probir.
Allison Avatar
July 12, 2017 at 6:03 AM
Lovely nostalgic write Agnes with beautiful description of childhood memories:-) hugs Jan xx
Krampe Avatar
July 13, 2017 at 6:14 PM
Thank you, Jan.
Dietrich Avatar
July 11, 2017 at 6:53 PM
EXCELLENT portrayal of blank verse with this theme Far Away. I used an oldie that also focused on memories from long ago. Sometimes we think so much alike, Agnes. I love this one. (love your enjambment here too. Don't know why some people hate enjambment)
Krampe Avatar
July 11, 2017 at 10:30 PM
Thanks, Andrea. I am a bit disappointed I was too slow, and the poem didn't come together in time for the contest, but can't force it. Enjambment makes blank verse unboring, in my opinion. I just got back from watching a 1.5 hour long play in blank verse, and without enjambment that would have been unbearable.
Wanter Avatar
July 11, 2017 at 6:50 PM
Wonderful soft nostalgia and hope. Beautiful images. I want to go there.
Krampe Avatar
July 11, 2017 at 10:30 PM
Thank you, Sunlite.
Cozart Avatar
July 11, 2017 at 6:26 PM
your line about the rhododendrons really did it for me.
Krampe Avatar
July 11, 2017 at 10:31 PM
Thanks, Dale. They are really there; they are about one hundred years old and huge and cavernous.
Sands Avatar
July 11, 2017 at 5:54 PM
Very good one with great descriptive details Agnes :)
Krampe Avatar
July 11, 2017 at 10:31 PM
Thank you, Heidi.
Green Avatar
July 11, 2017 at 5:53 PM
Such a nice poem Agnes. Though the being far away is a little sad the poem brings beautiful memories along with smiles to the reader. Nicely done my friend.
Krampe Avatar
July 11, 2017 at 10:32 PM
Thank you, Chris. I am sometimes quite sad about being so far from home. Most of the time, it's OK, but sometimes it hits me that the clock is ticking.
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