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Far Away

I am crying I don't know how I look to you I don't know that how you think about my look I don't think I am smart like your dream guy I don't agree with you that I am not stupid in love of you I don't show any false emotional persecution I don't cry but I will now because you're away from me I don't get sleep until you give me a hug I am crying because stars are Far away like my dead tears I am crying because you are a dear of my heart I am crying to not think about you I am crying with out a blink of night With love all Jagdish bajantri

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Date: 12/31/2021 10:15:00 PM
Unusual and well executed metaphor! Your poem is a whoosh shot of perfection. I loved it from beginning to end!
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Date: 12/31/2021 10:14:00 PM
Unusual and well executed metaphor! Your poem is a whoosh shot of perfection. I loved it from beginning to end!
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Jagdish Bajantri
Date: 1/1/2022 8:09:00 PM
Thanks my friends I wish my poem always give you a hug of charm chears

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