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Far Away

We are lost in the dark, guided only by fire flies. I reach for you, but I can not. Help me, I can no longer see you. So see me before I can not.

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Skat A

Date: 8/26/2013 8:41:00 PM

Dane, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, I love it!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* Skat *

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/26/2013 8:32:00 AM

Good morning Dane, a sad feeling when lost, and can't feel the heart of the ones you love. A nice Didactic, , , thank you for expressing your write and finding this site. -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Kim Van Breda

Date: 8/26/2013 7:03:00 AM

Wonderful vivid imagery here- great write and welcome to P/Soup. Xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/26/2013 5:38:00 AM

Welcome to P-Soup, Dane ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)