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Fantasy of Love

Way deep in the forest where everything is green A place where two people can answer their dream It truly seems to my wife and I, as it so often does Only find what is if you search through what was Our love is a story full of true mystical delight She is the fair maiden and I am the brave knight Our love is worth more than all the kings’ gold For what good is wealth if theirs no one to hold This forest is beaming it is beaming with life As I gaze upon the beauty known as my wife The crickets are playing their own special tune As a lone wolf howls to the beat of the moon The ground is covered in a blanket of white As her and I slide into the hot tub of delight I looked in her eyes and got lost in the dream As we offered the night the heat of our steam Like a kettle that whistles and then starts to blow The fire of our desire could melt all the snow I used to be a slave bound to my own lust My soul was a whatnot all covered in dust I’ve had many fantasies that I’m not proud of Peaking and tweaking in the arms of a dove They always left me feeling very empty and cold At the end of the night there was nothing to hold Those days are gone they are all in the past In my wife I have found love that will last My wife is a gift from the good Lord above She is also the fantasy that holds all my love Written for Christies Contest. I am hoping that we should have things taken care of personally by the 28th. Sorry i have been absent so long, God Bless, MJ

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Date: 4/19/2009 8:36:00 PM
A beautiful and magical write full of love and devotion.
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Date: 4/19/2009 11:18:00 AM
Such blessings in your writing! Many hugs and thanks!
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Date: 4/18/2009 4:12:00 AM
As I said before,,,your love for your wife is beautiful... hugs
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Date: 4/10/2009 4:45:00 AM
This is beautiful As where would we be without love...Thanks for comment..Blessings
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Date: 4/9/2009 7:19:00 AM
I love how you love your wife. take care ~ also, thank you for your kind comments ~
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Date: 4/5/2009 12:50:00 PM
Hey You! Big congrats on your awesome win in Christie's contest! Sorry this is so late, but as you know I have been super busy too! It was sooooo great getting your email. I am just starting myself to catch up here on the soup. Your poetry always touches me so deeply. Love you Michael. YF4L, Shar
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Date: 4/5/2009 4:31:00 AM
We have an archetypical anxiety that becomes our dream budding out from the forest of the subconscious, and its greatest yearning is love which found brings peace. A very deeply intelligent write about the human condition. Peace and love
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Date: 4/4/2009 9:32:00 PM
DearPresident of the Cool Name Club Mike, Congratulations on YOUR Honorable Mention in Crisie Contest well deserved Thank-YOU for YOUR Gracious Comments Yes, We are Blessed to have such Loving Wives and be able to return sevenfold ALWAYS...HG
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Date: 4/4/2009 8:56:00 AM
Congrats on your success in Christie's contest Michael.Rgds Brian
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Date: 4/4/2009 12:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your fantastic poem and well deserved win in Christie's excellent contest.
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Date: 4/3/2009 11:28:00 AM
Congrats on your win in the contest, MJ! This one's a fun couplet to be cherished. Warm regards, John.
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Date: 4/3/2009 6:49:00 AM
It is so nice to see you back among the Soup...we've missed you Michael. And this wonderful poem is well deserving to be among the winners! Congratulations dear neighbor, and thank you for all you recent kind comments...it's nice to hear from you! Love, Carrie
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Date: 4/3/2009 6:20:00 AM
I knew this one was a winner... Congratulations on the honorable mention in Christie's contest. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 4/2/2009 7:39:00 AM
Ahhh... a fellow romantic, though you seem not to be hopeless...LOL This is a wonderfully magical tale of beauty and love. Very passionate write.Great imagery! All wives should be so lucky. Great luck to you in the contest. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 3/31/2009 4:26:00 PM
This is beautiful Michael, simply grabs the heart and touches it with all its beauty! What a wonderful fantasy! Good luck! Love, Robin
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Date: 3/27/2009 7:45:00 PM
I love this, I am a romantic at heart, shhh, don't tell. But seriously this is great, and I envy what you have found, welcome back we have missed you. Good luck with everything, Aleera
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Date: 3/27/2009 3:03:00 PM
What a beautiful love you share. You are so lucky. Great write! Kirstie
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Date: 3/27/2009 8:07:00 AM
Nice work, Michael! You are blessed with a wonderful soul mate who shares both your love and your fantasies.
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Date: 3/24/2009 8:56:00 AM
the love between you and your wife is very special! thanks for sharing!
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Date: 3/24/2009 6:47:00 AM
Outstanding declaration of love... love that is rarely found but when it is, can last a lifetime..I am so happy for you and your wife..The union between the two of you was truly a gift from God.You are truly blessed and I wish you many more loving, warm happy years to come...This really touched my heart... Best wishes to you in the contest, I hope all is well with you. Always Tyesha YF4L
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Date: 3/23/2009 10:40:00 AM
Wow!! This is Excellent Michael. Love the imagery here and the lasting love you have found...Beautiful!!
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Date: 3/23/2009 12:24:00 AM
Best wishes Michael with this one Michael Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 3/22/2009 5:15:00 PM
love the imagery in this one. very well writting couplets. ("Peaking and tweaking in the arms of a dove"= awsome) Love and peace: james
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Date: 3/22/2009 4:35:00 PM
Excellent poem loaded with beautiful imagery. Best of luck in the contest...Raul
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Date: 3/22/2009 2:42:00 PM
winsome couplets Michael! and thank you!!
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