Fantasy Man

My fantasy man – I will always remember him
and how stunning he looked that day
outside my apartment building – tall, dark-eyed, and slim,
and wearing skin-tight levis. Oh, the flirty way
he looked me up and down, intentions clear! Yet not one word did he say.

His friend pulled up, honked the horn, and just like that
he turned to go, but not before he grinned at me
and as he did, he tipped his wide-brimmed hat.
A cocksure and sexy cowboy he appeared to be -
just the kind of guy that so attracted me.

I talked around and learned his name and that he rode a horse.
It turns out that young man was in the current rodeo.
Knowing this, I had to go, of course.
I saw him use a lasso, then ride a bull and not let go
for greater than eight seconds or so!

Foolishly hoping he’d consider meeting me, like a crazy hound
on his scent, I searched the crowd. What’s a smitten girl to do?
I wound up by the stables where I just hung around
dreaming of a future with a man I never even knew!
At last I found him – his arms around the woman he belonged to!


Written March 11, 2018 
for Robert Haigh's Eight Word Challenge - 24 lines maximum

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 4/10/2018 6:58:00 PM
Very cute there is nothing like horses I started riding and I hardly went to work I conducted business on my cell from that horse, so funny I wrote a story its called the city cowboy.
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Date: 3/16/2018 4:45:00 AM
Fun, lovely and a little sexy! Nicely done! Congrats, Andrea!
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Date: 3/15/2018 9:15:00 PM
Wonderful imagery in your poem, Andrea, and written very well using the required words. Congratulations on your 1st place win! Hugs,
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Date: 3/15/2018 8:27:00 PM
Fabulous story--told in a WINNING way, Andrea! CONGRATS! Janice
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Date: 3/15/2018 7:01:00 PM
A great fun story, so well-written, using this form, Andrea. I enjoyed reading it, and congratulations on your First Place on the podium! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 3/15/2018 5:50:00 PM
what a wonderful story teller you are Andrea ... shame it was fantasy and your dream wasn't cruelly shattered:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 3/15/2018 4:47:00 PM
Awwww...Andrea...what a great story an it's wonderful to hear that there is an element of truth to your story and you married him. How cool is that? Way! Congratulations on your well deserved win.
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Date: 3/15/2018 12:59:00 AM
Congratulations, Andrea on first position win. A great poetic narrative.
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Date: 3/14/2018 11:37:00 PM
Sincere congratulations on your well-deserved win, Andrea - blessings, and keep up the great work, friend! :-) <3
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Date: 3/14/2018 8:56:00 PM
Aw, I can definitely relate to that, great poem, great win, congratulations... Mick
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Date: 3/14/2018 8:56:00 PM
Congrats, Andrea, a lucky escape if you ask me.... well done. Viv x
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Date: 3/14/2018 4:19:00 PM
Back with most deserving congrats, Andrea. Well done.
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Date: 3/14/2018 4:01:00 PM
Great Poem Andrea, congrats on your 1st place, regards, Kevin xx
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Date: 3/14/2018 2:40:00 PM
Congrats Andrea.
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Date: 3/14/2018 1:39:00 PM
Congrats on your top win, Andrea! You doid a great job in this challenge:)
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Date: 3/14/2018 11:32:00 AM
Congratulations Andrea.
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Date: 3/13/2018 2:35:00 PM
I guess it was never meant to be, so common is such situations.. nice take on the contest Andrea..
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Date: 3/13/2018 1:38:00 PM
Oh well!:) Such is life. Love it!
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Date: 3/13/2018 1:42:00 AM
Such a lovely read, Andrea! Good luck in the contest and hope all is well :) love, Juli-Michelle
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Date: 3/13/2018 1:11:00 AM
Great story Andrea... Nicely done... Good luck in the contest... I enjoyed....
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Date: 3/12/2018 11:52:00 PM
I was always told, those huge belt buckles those cowboys wear are a tombstone over a dead "horse". Funny story. Good luck, Andrea.
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Date: 3/12/2018 9:55:00 PM
Such a delectable write Andrea. The required words melted into your delicious story-telling like butter on hot buns.. :)) I was captivated by every poetic line! Best wishes for a win!!
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Date: 3/12/2018 6:17:00 PM
Nice storytelling, Andrea. Autobiographical?
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 3/13/2018 8:50:00 AM
Mostly NOT autobiographical. The true part: I met my hubbie by my apt building and he was tall and handsome like a cowboy Everything else here is fictional.
Date: 3/12/2018 5:47:00 PM
That got cut short. For the best no doubt. A delightful read, Andrea.
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Date: 3/12/2018 4:26:00 PM
Quite a fantasy man you described Andrea. Well written as always..best for a win.
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