Fantasy Man

My fantasy man – I will always remember him
and how stunning he looked that day
outside my apartment building – tall, dark-eyed, and slim,
and wearing skin-tight levis. Oh, the flirty way
he looked me up and down, intentions clear! Yet not one word did he say.

His friend pulled up, honked the horn, and just like that
he turned to go, but not before he grinned at me
and as he did, he tipped his wide-brimmed hat.
A cocksure and sexy cowboy he appeared to be -
just the kind of guy that so attracted me.

I talked around and learned his name and that he rode a horse.
It turns out that young man was in the current rodeo.
Knowing this, I had to go, of course.
I saw him use a lasso, then ride a bull and not let go
for greater than eight seconds or so!

Foolishly hoping he’d consider meeting me, like a crazy hound
on his scent, I searched the crowd. What’s a smitten girl to do?
I wound up by the stables where I just hung around
dreaming of a future with a man I never even knew!
At last I found him – his arms around the woman he belonged to!


Written March 11, 2018 
for Robert Haigh's Eight Word Challenge - 24 lines maximum
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Acrich Avatar
April 10, 2018 at 6:58 PM
Very cute there is nothing like horses I started riding and I hardly went to work I conducted business on my cell from that horse, so funny I wrote a story its called the city cowboy.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 16, 2018 at 4:45 AM
Fun, lovely and a little sexy! Nicely done! Congrats, Andrea!
Roper Avatar
March 15, 2018 at 9:15 PM
Wonderful imagery in your poem, Andrea, and written very well using the required words. Congratulations on your 1st place win! Hugs,
Canerdy Avatar
March 15, 2018 at 8:27 PM
Fabulous story--told in a WINNING way, Andrea! CONGRATS! Janice
Haight Avatar
March 15, 2018 at 7:01 PM
A great fun story, so well-written, using this form, Andrea. I enjoyed reading it, and congratulations on your First Place on the podium! Hugs, Sandra
Allison Avatar
March 15, 2018 at 5:50 PM
what a wonderful story teller you are Andrea ... shame it was fantasy and your dream wasn't cruelly shattered:-) hugs jan xx
Tripp Avatar
March 15, 2018 at 4:47 PM
Awwww...Andrea...what a great story an it's wonderful to hear that there is an element of truth to your story and you married him. How cool is that? Way! Congratulations on your well deserved win.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
March 15, 2018 at 12:59 AM
Congratulations, Andrea on first position win. A great poetic narrative.
Barden Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 11:37 PM
Sincere congratulations on your well-deserved win, Andrea - blessings, and keep up the great work, friend! :-) <3
Talbot Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 8:56 PM
Aw, I can definitely relate to that, great poem, great win, congratulations... Mick
Wigley Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 8:56 PM
Congrats, Andrea, a lucky escape if you ask me.... well done. Viv x
Gauthier Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 4:19 PM
Back with most deserving congrats, Andrea. Well done.
Shaw Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 4:01 PM
Great Poem Andrea, congrats on your 1st place, regards, Kevin xx
Carmack Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 2:40 PM
Congrats Andrea.
Leiser Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 1:39 PM
Congrats on your top win, Andrea! You doid a great job in this challenge:)
Cunningham Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 11:32 AM
Congratulations Andrea.
One Avatar
March 13, 2018 at 2:35 PM
I guess it was never meant to be, so common is such situations.. nice take on the contest Andrea..
DiMino Avatar
March 13, 2018 at 1:38 PM
Oh well!:) Such is life. Love it!
Michelle Avatar
March 13, 2018 at 1:42 AM
Such a lovely read, Andrea! Good luck in the contest and hope all is well :) love, Juli-Michelle
Kannan Avatar
March 13, 2018 at 1:11 AM
Great story Andrea... Nicely done... Good luck in the contest... I enjoyed....
Turner Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 11:52 PM
I was always told, those huge belt buckles those cowboys wear are a tombstone over a dead "horse". Funny story. Good luck, Andrea.
Ashley Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 9:55 PM
Such a delectable write Andrea. The required words melted into your delicious story-telling like butter on hot buns.. :)) I was captivated by every poetic line! Best wishes for a win!!
Krampe Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 6:17 PM
Nice storytelling, Andrea. Autobiographical?
Dietrich Avatar
March 13, 2018 at 8:50 AM
Mostly NOT autobiographical. The true part: I met my hubbie by my apt building and he was tall and handsome like a cowboy Everything else here is fictional.
Gauthier Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 5:47 PM
That got cut short. For the best no doubt. A delightful read, Andrea.
Pandit Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 4:26 PM
Quite a fantasy man you described Andrea. Well written as always..best for a win.
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