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Illusions are smoke and mirrors; the sky's black, and yet, we see blue. And like sheep, we're led by shearers whose reality blocks our view. Flashing neon propositions youth as the city lures with lights. And the lambs rush to the slaughter, unaware reality bites. Like taboo magic elixirs, drugs hold anxieties in check. But if you overindulge, you'll morph into a physical wreck. Politicians promise the world; yet provide substantially less. And when caught in an outright lie, they blame each other for their mess. Parks attract drunks and criminals that bully and instigate fights. And cops harass homeless people, denying them their human rights. We ponder possibilities, for nothing is quite what it seems. And hide in never-never land, inside of our fantasy dreams.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 3/17/2018 1:41:00 PM
I love the opening and closing stanzas, Emile. Strong messaging.
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Date: 3/17/2018 1:55:00 PM
Thanks Line, your visits are most appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/14/2016 4:20:00 AM
Boy is this one filled with truth Emile. I think to be a poet you have to be a bit of a dreamer. A very good hyp write my friend!
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Date: 1/14/2016 8:38:00 AM
Thanks Connie, your support is most appreciated. Emile.
Date: 1/13/2016 5:42:00 PM
excellent write Emile...the words are superb
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Date: 1/14/2016 8:38:00 AM
Thanks White Sage, your support is most appreciated. Emile.
Date: 1/13/2016 2:07:00 PM
all the lights and pageantry for political tricks... serious work well delivered, emile.. huggs
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Date: 1/14/2016 8:40:00 AM
Thanks Nette, your comments are most appreciated. Emile.
Date: 1/13/2016 12:04:00 PM
Well done, Emile. Too bad we have to live in the reality of what this world has become. If not for our dreams and faith it would be hard to navigate through life.
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Date: 1/14/2016 8:41:00 AM
Thanks Lin, you got that right... your comments are most appreciated. Emile.

Book: Shattered Sighs