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Fantastic Funnymoon

How desperately dull my dreary life. I wonder will I ever woo a wife. Working wearily the whole day, how can I hope to find a way? I'll book a break before long. Learn to lilt a lovely song. Dedicate myself to dancing. Soon, she'll come along. I'll sweetly sweep her off her feet. Make out we were meant to meet. Kneel upon one knee and say. Honey, how about our happy day? We'll wed on Wednesday after next. I'll book a boarding that's the best. We'll sail the seas and spend our savings financing a funnymoon forming babies.

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Christuraj Alex

Date: 4/22/2022 9:27:00 PM

Beautifully written with a very attractive title. Congratulations!

Jean Murray
Date: 4/23/2022 11:20:00 AM

Thank you Christuraj. Sadly my lovely muse has left me. I no longer have new poems for new contests. Someday soon somehow she may surprise me.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/8/2018 9:08:00 PM

Whimsically fun, a poem we could easily share with all of the boys and girls from Kindergarten up during April, Poetry Month. KUDDOS! My identical twin muses, Frix and Frax are sounding their heralds in your honor. And My faeries are clapping for you! Thank you, Jean.

Jean Murray
Date: 4/9/2018 3:08:00 AM

Say Hello to Frix and Frax for me please Caren. Check out SUMMER SOLSTICE. My garden is full of faries.

Eve Roper

Date: 4/3/2018 9:53:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Jean, excellent alliteration. Hugs Eve ~`*

Jean Murray
Date: 4/4/2018 3:24:00 AM

Good morning Eve. I had good fun with this one.

Line Gauthier

Date: 4/3/2018 3:11:00 PM

Back with most deserving congrats, Jean.

Jean Murray
Date: 4/3/2018 3:18:00 PM

Thank you so much Line.

Judith S

Date: 4/2/2018 7:39:00 PM

Congratulations Jean! I love the light and humorous vibe :) ~Judy

Jean Murray
Date: 4/3/2018 1:12:00 AM

Thank you Judy.

Susan Ashley

Date: 4/1/2018 6:59:00 PM

A sweet and whimsical poem that tickled me Jean. Congratulations on your fantastic win! Warmest wishes..

Jean Murray
Date: 4/1/2018 7:24:00 PM

Thank you Susan.

Elaine George

Date: 4/1/2018 6:40:00 PM

I enjoyed this very much. Many congrats on your top notch placement.

Jean Murray
Date: 4/1/2018 7:23:00 PM

Thank you Elaine.

Silent One

Date: 4/1/2018 3:17:00 PM

Sounds fantastic, what happened after the dancing? Congratulations on your placement in the contest...

Jean Murray
Date: 4/1/2018 3:27:00 PM

After the dancing he was prancing like a stud Silent. Thank you for my placement.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/1/2018 3:12:00 PM

- The winners are named and it was great to see your poem on the winning list - Congratulations, Jean :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jean Murray
Date: 4/1/2018 3:26:00 PM

For your continued wonderful support, thank you Anne-Lise.

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 4/1/2018 6:44:00 AM

Made me giggle, sweet penning Jean :)

Jean Murray
Date: 4/1/2018 9:45:00 AM

Me too!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/31/2018 1:41:00 PM

A fun read..pleasure to read a sweet story!

Jean Murray
Date: 3/31/2018 1:53:00 PM

Thankfully, I can't help what pops into my head Vijay.

Line Gauthier

Date: 3/31/2018 12:33:00 PM

Delightfully whimsical poem, Jean.

Jean Murray
Date: 3/31/2018 1:52:00 PM

If only life was that whimsical Line.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/31/2018 12:14:00 PM

A lovely verse Jean, I hope they lived happily ever after. Happy Easter. Tom

Jean Murray
Date: 3/31/2018 12:17:00 PM

I've a funny feeling that will be fulfilled Tom. Happy Easter to you too.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/31/2018 12:07:00 PM

- A bit difficult form, but you have done this with a smile Jean :) - Luck in the contest - (my first too :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jean Murray
Date: 3/31/2018 12:14:00 PM

Hi Anne-Lise. Spring must be in the air. My Dad always called it with an F. He also said it was the most fun you could have without laughing.

Probir Gupta

Date: 3/31/2018 11:19:00 AM

Beautiful ... A pleasant read ...

Jean Murray
Date: 3/31/2018 11:29:00 AM

My first attempt at this form Probir. I'm not sure I got it right, but I had fun and that what counts. Lovely to see you.