Jean Murray Poet Alliteration

Fantastic Funnymoon

How desperately dull my dreary life.
I wonder will I ever woo a wife.
Working wearily the whole day,
how can I hope to find a way?

I'll book a break before long.
Learn to lilt a lovely song.
Dedicate myself to dancing.
Soon, she'll come along.

I'll sweetly sweep her off her feet.
Make out we were meant to meet.
Kneel upon one knee and say.
Honey, how about our happy day?

We'll wed on Wednesday after next.
I'll book a boarding that's the best.
We'll sail the seas and spend our savings
financing a funnymoon forming babies.

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Christuraj Alex April 22, 2022 at 9:27 PM Beautifully written with a very attractive title. Congratulations! Jean Murray April 23, 2022 at 11:20 AM Thank you Christuraj. Sadly my lovely muse has left me. I no longer have new poems for new contests. Someday soon somehow she may surprise me.

Caren Krutsinger April 8, 2018 at 9:08 PM Whimsically fun, a poem we could easily share with all of the boys and girls from Kindergarten up during April, Poetry Month. KUDDOS! My identical twin muses, Frix and Frax are sounding their heralds in your honor. And My faeries are clapping for you! Thank you, Jean. Jean Murray April 9, 2018 at 3:08 AM Say Hello to Frix and Frax for me please Caren. Check out SUMMER SOLSTICE. My garden is full of faries.

Eve Roper April 3, 2018 at 9:53 PM Congratulations on your win, Jean, excellent alliteration. Hugs Eve ~`* Jean Murray April 4, 2018 at 3:24 AM Good morning Eve. I had good fun with this one.

Line Gauthier April 3, 2018 at 3:11 PM Back with most deserving congrats, Jean. Jean Murray April 3, 2018 at 3:18 PM Thank you so much Line.

Judith S April 2, 2018 at 7:39 PM Congratulations Jean! I love the light and humorous vibe :) ~Judy Jean Murray April 3, 2018 at 1:12 AM Thank you Judy.

Susan Ashley April 1, 2018 at 6:59 PM A sweet and whimsical poem that tickled me Jean. Congratulations on your fantastic win! Warmest wishes.. Jean Murray April 1, 2018 at 7:24 PM Thank you Susan.

Elaine George April 1, 2018 at 6:40 PM I enjoyed this very much. Many congrats on your top notch placement. Jean Murray April 1, 2018 at 7:23 PM Thank you Elaine.

Silent One April 1, 2018 at 3:17 PM Sounds fantastic, what happened after the dancing? Congratulations on your placement in the contest... Jean Murray April 1, 2018 at 3:27 PM After the dancing he was prancing like a stud Silent. Thank you for my placement.

Anne-Lise Andresen April 1, 2018 at 3:12 PM - The winners are named and it was great to see your poem on the winning list - Congratulations, Jean :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Jean Murray April 1, 2018 at 3:26 PM For your continued wonderful support, thank you Anne-Lise.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart April 1, 2018 at 6:44 AM Made me giggle, sweet penning Jean :) Jean Murray April 1, 2018 at 9:45 AM Me too!

Vijay Pandit March 31, 2018 at 1:41 PM A fun read..pleasure to read a sweet story! Jean Murray March 31, 2018 at 1:53 PM Thankfully, I can't help what pops into my head Vijay.

Line Gauthier March 31, 2018 at 12:33 PM Delightfully whimsical poem, Jean. Jean Murray March 31, 2018 at 1:52 PM If only life was that whimsical Line.

Tom Cunningham March 31, 2018 at 12:14 PM A lovely verse Jean, I hope they lived happily ever after. Happy Easter. Tom Jean Murray March 31, 2018 at 12:17 PM I've a funny feeling that will be fulfilled Tom. Happy Easter to you too.

Anne-Lise Andresen March 31, 2018 at 12:07 PM - A bit difficult form, but you have done this with a smile Jean :) - Luck in the contest - (my first too :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Jean Murray March 31, 2018 at 12:14 PM Hi Anne-Lise. Spring must be in the air. My Dad always called it with an F. He also said it was the most fun you could have without laughing.

Probir Gupta March 31, 2018 at 11:19 AM Beautiful ... A pleasant read ... Jean Murray March 31, 2018 at 11:29 AM My first attempt at this form Probir. I'm not sure I got it right, but I had fun and that what counts. Lovely to see you.