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Fantastic Funnymoon

How desperately dull my dreary life.
I wonder will I ever woo a wife.
Working wearily the whole day,
how can I hope to find a way?

I'll book a break before long.
Learn to lilt a lovely song.
Dedicate myself to dancing.
Soon, she'll come along.

I'll sweetly sweep her off her feet.
Make out we were meant to meet.
Kneel upon one knee and say.
Honey, how about our happy day?

We'll wed on Wednesday after next.
I'll book a boarding that's the best.
We'll sail the seas and spend our savings
financing a funnymoon forming babies.

Copyright © Jean Murray | Year Posted 2018

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Christuraj Alex Date: 4/22/2022 9:27:00 PM Beautifully written with a very attractive title. Congratulations! Login to Reply Jean Murray Date: 4/23/2022 11:20:00 AM Thank you Christuraj. Sadly my lovely muse has left me. I no longer have new poems for new contests. Someday soon somehow she may surprise me.

Caren Krutsinger Date: 4/8/2018 9:08:00 PM Whimsically fun, a poem we could easily share with all of the boys and girls from Kindergarten up during April, Poetry Month. KUDDOS! My identical twin muses, Frix and Frax are sounding their heralds in your honor. And My faeries are clapping for you! Thank you, Jean. Login to Reply Jean Murray Date: 4/9/2018 3:08:00 AM Say Hello to Frix and Frax for me please Caren. Check out SUMMER SOLSTICE. My garden is full of faries.

Eve Roper Date: 4/3/2018 9:53:00 PM Congratulations on your win, Jean, excellent alliteration. Hugs Eve ~`* Login to Reply Jean Murray Date: 4/4/2018 3:24:00 AM Good morning Eve. I had good fun with this one.

Line Gauthier Date: 4/3/2018 3:11:00 PM Back with most deserving congrats, Jean. Login to Reply Jean Murray Date: 4/3/2018 3:18:00 PM Thank you so much Line.

Judith S Date: 4/2/2018 7:39:00 PM Congratulations Jean! I love the light and humorous vibe :) ~Judy Login to Reply Jean Murray Date: 4/3/2018 1:12:00 AM Thank you Judy.

Susan Ashley Date: 4/1/2018 6:59:00 PM A sweet and whimsical poem that tickled me Jean. Congratulations on your fantastic win! Warmest wishes.. Login to Reply Jean Murray Date: 4/1/2018 7:24:00 PM Thank you Susan.

Elaine George Date: 4/1/2018 6:40:00 PM I enjoyed this very much. Many congrats on your top notch placement. Login to Reply Jean Murray Date: 4/1/2018 7:23:00 PM Thank you Elaine.

Silent One Date: 4/1/2018 3:17:00 PM Sounds fantastic, what happened after the dancing? Congratulations on your placement in the contest... Login to Reply Jean Murray Date: 4/1/2018 3:27:00 PM After the dancing he was prancing like a stud Silent. Thank you for my placement.

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/1/2018 3:12:00 PM - The winners are named and it was great to see your poem on the winning list - Congratulations, Jean :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Jean Murray Date: 4/1/2018 3:26:00 PM For your continued wonderful support, thank you Anne-Lise.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 4/1/2018 6:44:00 AM Made me giggle, sweet penning Jean :) Login to Reply Jean Murray Date: 4/1/2018 9:45:00 AM Me too!

Vijay Pandit Date: 3/31/2018 1:41:00 PM A fun read..pleasure to read a sweet story! Login to Reply Jean Murray Date: 3/31/2018 1:53:00 PM Thankfully, I can't help what pops into my head Vijay.

Line Gauthier Date: 3/31/2018 12:33:00 PM Delightfully whimsical poem, Jean. Login to Reply Jean Murray Date: 3/31/2018 1:52:00 PM If only life was that whimsical Line.

Tom Cunningham Date: 3/31/2018 12:14:00 PM A lovely verse Jean, I hope they lived happily ever after. Happy Easter. Tom Login to Reply Jean Murray Date: 3/31/2018 12:17:00 PM I've a funny feeling that will be fulfilled Tom. Happy Easter to you too.

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/31/2018 12:07:00 PM - A bit difficult form, but you have done this with a smile Jean :) - Luck in the contest - (my first too :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Jean Murray Date: 3/31/2018 12:14:00 PM Hi Anne-Lise. Spring must be in the air. My Dad always called it with an F. He also said it was the most fun you could have without laughing.

Probir Gupta Date: 3/31/2018 11:19:00 AM Beautiful ... A pleasant read ... Login to Reply Jean Murray Date: 3/31/2018 11:29:00 AM My first attempt at this form Probir. I'm not sure I got it right, but I had fun and that what counts. Lovely to see you.