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Fancy's not Free

I’ve always wanted fancy So my car’s a Bentley Why am I not satisfied For years I’ve craved a mansion My house cost me a ransom Why am I empty inside Seems my car and my house don’t add up to much ~ Could Midas have lost his touch

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Date: 4/3/2024 6:40:00 PM
You must be getting old, gw. You certainly made it financially. BB
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Date: 4/3/2024 7:38:00 PM
Well, you can't take it with you, as they say...
Date: 4/2/2024 2:43:00 PM
i guess the best things in life are free after all, gershon!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/2/2024 8:09:00 PM
How 'bout that?! You are right, of course. Thanks, Ilene! ~ gw
Date: 4/2/2024 12:10:00 PM
Hello Gershon, I do think that Midas has lost it touch. Enjoy yoour day my friend. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/3/2024 2:58:00 PM
Hellpo Gershon, I believe you are right./ enjoyh your evening my friend. /Darlene/
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/2/2024 8:12:00 PM
Midas' golden touch has turned to tin, it seems. Thanks, Darlene.
Date: 4/2/2024 5:00:00 AM
Outstanding. While clever, your poem is thought provoking. Gosh, I'd forgotten about dear ol' Midas.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/2/2024 8:24:00 PM
I'd forgotten about dear ol' Midas too, Sara. Apparently the King was quite successful in getting his brand to 'muffle' his 'golden touch.' ~ Mr. Mine E. Key

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