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Family Ties

Family ties welcoming with warm bliss midst kiss and hugs of every brod and sis contagious laughter of exuberance... exude our ancestral house we can’t miss. Thus, in passing by an ancient abode its garden full of ferns, and weeds-bestowed decrepit roof whispers “I need repair” we just sighed at the load along the road. Evoking forlorn beyond grandeur-state ramshackled porch hides against rusty gate while antique door bearing rosette design shows golden staircase railings of great weight. Touched by the sight of the pitiful site we know in our hearts, we should do what’s right as now, we behold through our van’s window home we pray* as our faith's dome of delight.
*2Thessalonians 1:11 Wherefore also we pray always for you, that our God would count you worthy of this calling, and fulfil all the good pleasure of his goodness, and the work of faith with power. July 18, 2020 2nd place, "Decaying House" Poetry Contest Sponsored by Constance La France; judged on 7/19/2020.
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Mishra Avatar
July 27, 2020 at 5:10 AM
Your touching muse gives us such a beautiful message of the love of a family Beata. Congratulations on your win :)
La France Avatar
July 25, 2020 at 9:41 AM
Beata, congratulations on your win in my decaying house contest with this wonderful write _Constance
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
July 22, 2020 at 2:31 PM
Beautiful rendering, Beata, much love in your words and blessing for your gracious win -- Aloha~@William
Brul Avatar
July 19, 2020 at 9:01 PM
This lovely poem brought tears to my eyes...Congratulations dear Beata..This gonna be a FAVE!!!
Allison Avatar
July 19, 2020 at 4:14 PM
a very touching piece beata, many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Pandit Avatar
July 19, 2020 at 7:31 AM
You created a loving story of how a family feels when recalling our past--no wonder then we are touched! Your poem is a treasure of goodness, Beata.
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