Familiar Foes

Oh a winner again...so amazing! Congrats

Very wise...love the last two monokus!

I at times consider people fame the price.? Many are bought out..The establishment swoops down four scouser working class Lads bugged many people out, a kbe i dangled And sir paulie is on cloud nine.' Singing for the Kings and emperors so to wax.' No longer the Potent force for change, lesson learned old Guy new song.' Covent garden to let it loose And 20 big celebritys happened to be there the Song is acclaimed, it was all unplanned of Course.' Well of course spur of the minute.'

A very creative Monoku write. I enjoyed this one... Have a great/blessed day...............

Excellent way to describe these beautiful people so shallow on the inside

Your skillful usage of the syllable-strained framework to seamlessly portray feelings reminiscent of free verse poetry is truly impressive. Your extraordinary poetic prowess is admirable dear friend. Not all rays in the Tuscan sky possess the luminosity of gold. Ink, your words are so eloquent.

I agree with what the lioness said.. four great monoku, and you have to be careful with people in this world, even those that claim to be our friends... nice imagery in the last one and metaphorical monoku are your speciality..

I like how you use this syllable constrained form to paint emotions as easily as a free verse poem. Kudos to your poetic prowess, my friend. --not every tuscan twinkle is gold--I hear you, Ink.

Creative lines penned. Thank you for sharing them with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K

I shall have to revisit these when I am fully awake.....very interesting.....but I haven't finished my coffee....

Tea rose twilights . Wow . You just nailed it.

Ooooo that opening line papi!!! sometimes…beneath conceited clouds we swirl~cloaked in rainbow radiance… mmm .. cunning wings of bittersweet butterflies.. mmmhmm damn butterflies!!!! That’s y neeed the sunscreen aeee from these insects!! SPF10000! not every tuscan twinkle is gold .. damn rite then !!!!! nor do they speak tea rose twilights.. oooo child that ending is on the perfect perioooood!!!

Oh my, what an evocative and thought-provoking chain of monoku this is! I am enchantingly in awe of your mesmerizing wordplay that draws shades of profound depth within heartfelt lines. Very true, cloaked in rainbow radiance, we somehow fail to recognise those selfish/self-serving songs of familiar faces and we are blinded by our naive innocence.. Those cunning wings of bittersweet butterflies aren't always magical! And so rightly said.. Not every "tuscan twinkle is gold" Sigh, deeply resonating