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Familiar Infinitian

FAMILIAR Far from here my muse writes poems that Ache right through my soul of need Make me yearn- beg and plead In ways that ache for Love not mere gain I want more And take Root October 2015

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Skat A

Date: 10/19/2015 11:25:00 PM

Hi Kim, Congrats on your win. --SKAT :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 10/17/2015 1:21:00 AM

Congrats on ur awesome winning write Kim!

Kim Van Breda

Date: 10/16/2015 9:57:00 PM

Thank you to all you fellow "Soupers" for your encouraging comments. The placing was an unexpected but pleasant surprise :) ~~X~~

Carrie Richards

Date: 10/16/2015 8:00:00 PM

Your poems have also taken root with those who enjoy them so much!! Well done, Kim !!

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/16/2015 7:52:00 PM

Kim, I enjoyed the message . Nice form! Congratulations on your win:-) Alexis

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/16/2015 7:35:00 PM

Just love the message in this one. Congrats for your fine win.

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 10/16/2015 4:43:00 PM

a smooth rendering of the form, polished, with depth and a nice bit of rhyme need/plead; those last three lines are particularly good - congrats on your win in my contest!

Kim Van Breda
Date: 10/16/2015 10:00:00 PM

Thank you Charlotte.. appreciate the recognition ~~X~~

Jan Allison

Date: 10/16/2015 4:33:00 PM

beautifully penned Kim many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx