False Alarm

You Fall ...

the ground of your reality dissolves in this
stream of distraction, this inconvenient passion
the mawkish pop music you mock
is now singing your story, as
your thoughts, your breath, your blood
all consumed by his eyes, his voice, his words
all the moments of his notice of you
painting your gray paper with extrinsic purple
and lavish green, filling your thirsty cup
with intoxicating attention, until time
is measured only by your meetings

     You Stall...

hitting the invisible, inimical wall
penalized and ostracized
for presuming the right to ask why
for waking from complicit worship
for retaking your will and your mind
for staining his golden idol
with faith of the atheist

     You Call...

for all his proud proclamations
he is a needy, greedy child
your adoration is his sun
your life force he feasts on
disenchantment is your release
from the prison of submission
his hollow heart, his churlish charm
all merely a false alarm-

9/10/18

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 10/2/2018 9:34:00 PM
Michelle, a wonderful rhythm takes one through the intriguing beauty of your verses with ease. A deep and meaningful poem, rich in emotion and imagery. Congratulations on your excellent win.. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 10/1/2018 11:18:00 AM
Wonderful free verse Michelle, like you my rhymes still find a way into a free verse write, but that's ok I like it, congrats on a fine win!
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 10/1/2018 2:50:00 PM
Thank you for placing me in your contest, John!
Date: 9/17/2018 9:33:00 PM
Michelle, you are simply wrong: You ARE right up there with Shakespeare, Virginia Woolf, and all the rest. Your poetry takes my breath away. Kudos. ~ Gershon
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 9/18/2018 2:49:00 PM
I'm working on my free verse, for me it's very challenging; even when I try not to rhyme, they slip in!
Date: 9/17/2018 11:04:00 AM
Great poem, Michelle. Depth of thought/simplicity of expression. Your muse emanation elevates the conscience and consciousness. Supernova poetry. Love and more love always.
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 9/18/2018 2:50:00 PM
So appreciate your insightful comments, Freddie!
Date: 9/12/2018 12:32:00 PM
Very well executed my friend...great motion thru...love & light...^WW^
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 9/13/2018 1:15:00 PM
Thank you, WW!
Date: 9/12/2018 4:49:00 AM
There's a wonderful fluidity in this poem, Michelle. Super imagery, too. Well penned.
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 9/13/2018 1:16:00 PM
Appreciate your comment, M.L!
Date: 9/10/2018 4:22:00 PM
Michelle, this poem has such beautiful movement taking one through hurt, despair, loss, anger, self forgiveness and restoration. Love this!!!!
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 9/10/2018 5:03:00 PM
Thank you for your kind comment, Gabrielle!
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