False Alarm

You Fall ...

the ground of your reality dissolves in this
stream of distraction, this inconvenient passion
the mawkish pop music you mock
is now singing your story, as
your thoughts, your breath, your blood
all consumed by his eyes, his voice, his words
all the moments of his notice of you
painting your gray paper with extrinsic purple
and lavish green, filling your thirsty cup
with intoxicating attention, until time
is measured only by your meetings

     You Stall...

hitting the invisible, inimical wall
penalized and ostracized
for presuming the right to ask why
for waking from complicit worship
for retaking your will and your mind
for staining his golden idol
with faith of the atheist

     You Call...

for all his proud proclamations
he is a needy, greedy child
your adoration is his sun
your life force he feasts on
disenchantment is your release
from the prison of submission
his hollow heart, his churlish charm
all merely a false alarm-

9/10/18
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Ashley Avatar
October 2, 2018 at 9:34 PM
Michelle, a wonderful rhythm takes one through the intriguing beauty of your verses with ease. A deep and meaningful poem, rich in emotion and imagery. Congratulations on your excellent win.. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Hamilton Avatar
October 1, 2018 at 11:18 AM
Wonderful free verse Michelle, like you my rhymes still find a way into a free verse write, but that's ok I like it, congrats on a fine win!
Faulkner Avatar
October 1, 2018 at 2:50 PM
Thank you for placing me in your contest, John!
Wolf Avatar
September 17, 2018 at 9:33 PM
Michelle, you are simply wrong: You ARE right up there with Shakespeare, Virginia Woolf, and all the rest. Your poetry takes my breath away. Kudos. ~ Gershon
Faulkner Avatar
September 18, 2018 at 2:49 PM
I'm working on my free verse, for me it's very challenging; even when I try not to rhyme, they slip in!
Robinson Jr. Avatar
September 17, 2018 at 11:04 AM
Great poem, Michelle. Depth of thought/simplicity of expression. Your muse emanation elevates the conscience and consciousness. Supernova poetry. Love and more love always.
Faulkner Avatar
September 18, 2018 at 2:50 PM
So appreciate your insightful comments, Freddie!
Warrior Avatar
September 12, 2018 at 12:32 PM
Very well executed my friend...great motion thru...love & light...^WW^
Faulkner Avatar
September 13, 2018 at 1:15 PM
Thank you, WW!
Kiser Avatar
September 12, 2018 at 4:49 AM
There's a wonderful fluidity in this poem, Michelle. Super imagery, too. Well penned.
Faulkner Avatar
September 13, 2018 at 1:16 PM
Appreciate your comment, M.L!
Jordan Avatar
September 10, 2018 at 4:22 PM
Michelle, this poem has such beautiful movement taking one through hurt, despair, loss, anger, self forgiveness and restoration. Love this!!!!
Faulkner Avatar
September 10, 2018 at 5:03 PM
Thank you for your kind comment, Gabrielle!
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