Fall's Friend

frost is on its way flowers feel with their petals fall’s friend is not warmth Written September 27, 2022

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 9/28/2022 9:49:00 AM

love the way you sneaked alliteration into this one

L Milton Hankins
Date: 9/28/2022 10:07:00 AM

Thank you so much, Caren.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 9/28/2022 8:46:00 AM

A BRILLIANT HAIKU BUT I HAVE PICKED UP THAT YOU ARE MUCH LIKE MY HUBBY, YOU HATE PUTTING YOUR SHORTS AWAY. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. sorry about caps and small letters but it is my biggest failing, hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 9/28/2022 9:23:00 AM

Jennifer, if that's your biggest failing, you are definitely okay!!! Thanks for the visit and the comment.

Michael Tor

Date: 9/27/2022 5:52:00 PM

That's for sure Milton. No argument here. Well written and said. Thanks for sharing...

L Milton Hankins
Date: 9/27/2022 6:48:00 PM

You're welcome, Michael. Thanks so much for reading and commenting on my poems!