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Brian Strand's 1415, 9/27/2025

September is just the beginning of the end. Wise colors shine forth. Most leaves are still attached. We await God's palate of colors.

 

Fallout

frivolous throughout green woods mellow yellow in hideaway gadabouts biding their time fallout will be glorious as the leaves mingle before wintering
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September 30, 2025 at 6:31 AM
Beautiful imagery, Kim. Well done for winning the contest. Enjoy your day
Rodrigues Avatar
September 30, 2025 at 7:13 AM
I appreciate you, Lasaad! Thank you!
Blanca Avatar
September 29, 2025 at 4:50 PM
Nature knows the seasons Kim, and you know how to display them.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 29, 2025 at 6:09 PM
Thank you, Lupita!
DiMino Avatar
September 29, 2025 at 5:14 AM
Great imagery! Congratulations. Well deserved.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 29, 2025 at 5:34 AM
Thank you, Joe! It is what I see right now. Love that we are surrounded by many trees!
Dietrich Avatar
September 28, 2025 at 10:08 AM
Love this congrats on your win
Rodrigues Avatar
September 28, 2025 at 12:40 PM
Thank you, Andrea!
Fowler Avatar
September 28, 2025 at 7:15 AM
Love the fallout Kim. Congratulations! :)
Rodrigues Avatar
September 28, 2025 at 12:40 PM
Thank you, Linda!
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September 28, 2025 at 6:12 AM
Lovely imagery and poem Kim! Debx
Rodrigues Avatar
September 28, 2025 at 12:39 PM
Thank you, Deb!
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September 27, 2025 at 5:17 PM
awesome imagery, Kim, and a good contest contender...have a splendid autumn weekend, hugs, Sara
Rodrigues Avatar
September 28, 2025 at 12:39 PM
Thank you, Sara!
Hind Avatar
September 27, 2025 at 11:52 AM
"mellow yellow in hideaway" very neat and beautiful
Rodrigues Avatar
September 27, 2025 at 11:55 AM
Thank you, Paige! :)
Andresen Avatar
September 27, 2025 at 11:32 AM
- Great written, Kim :) - GL in the contest :) - Have a lovely weekend - hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
September 27, 2025 at 11:55 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise! Have a lovely weekend too!
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