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Falling Stars

Silent wishes on a breeze Touch the soul with ease Knowing what the river sent In all its currents to relent Standing beneath the same sky As the sun and moon pass by Where bright falling stars streak Upon hidden things we seek Heidi Sands 11/4/17

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Russell Sivey

Date: 11/5/2017 6:20:00 AM

I just LOVE falling stars, they are one of natures most beautiful occurrences that I have seen! You write about this beckons me to sit outside tonight and watch the sky under the stars! They are beautiful especially in the country...you can't see them much in the city! I live in the country so I get to see every nuance of nature, including snakes and spiders (Yikes!)! What a wonderful piece Heidi! Great Work!!

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/5/2017 6:31:00 AM

So do I Russell . You are right, easier to see in the country. I love the rural country. I hope that you can see some beautiful ones. Thank you :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/4/2017 1:13:00 PM

A joy to read--short, yet full of imagery!

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/4/2017 1:27:00 PM

Thank you Vijay! :)

Jan Allison

Date: 11/4/2017 1:10:00 PM

what a charming rhyme, I love looking at the stars especially when we go for our midnight moonlight walks:-) hugs jan xx

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/4/2017 1:26:00 PM

Thank you Jan. The midnight moonlight walks sound fun :)

Tim Smith

Date: 11/4/2017 12:46:00 PM

Lovely Heidi...I picture you sitting on the porch gazing at the sky.

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/4/2017 1:07:00 PM

Thank you Tim. I love to see the sky from this hill :)

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 11/4/2017 11:07:00 AM

I agree w/Regina ... a very celestial write. Beautifully expressed w/exquisite emotional superimposed nature imagery. A gem of a poem. Love and more love always.

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/4/2017 11:16:00 AM

Thanks so much Freddie :)

Charlie Smith

Date: 11/4/2017 10:50:00 AM

Lovely write Heidi, thank you...

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/4/2017 11:16:00 AM

Thank you Charlie :)

Joseph May

Date: 11/4/2017 10:17:00 AM

Silent wishes on a fallen star, beautiful write Heidi

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/4/2017 10:25:00 AM

Thank you :)