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Falling Stars

So many falling stars!
A meteor shower bursting
like a miniature firework,
Silvery sparkles diving down the sky,
There behind the northern star
Down to the hazy horizon
Far from the Centaurus constellation.
Sinking in oblivion.

My love urged me to make a wish.
Do falling stars grant any wish?
No reply. My love had wandered off.
Worried I felt the spontaneous gyrations of my heart. 

I strayed in the dark park searching,
Hearing coyotes howl, owls hooting,
Mice scuttling in the under wood.
I hunted earnestly hoping to see her there.
But she had disappeared 
As I looked up at the last falling star.

Wake up, man, love comes not from stars.
And yet it was such a lovely sight
That I was not ready to deny my dreams
no matter what anyone might think.
So I wished with all my heart.
Just one falling star might come true.
My love was waiting for me ardently.
See, she was behind a tree
Hiding from the falling stars.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Zahid Avatar
August 19, 2022 at 9:52 AM
Interesting.. Vivid imagery... Nicely penned
Roper Avatar
August 18, 2022 at 8:09 AM
Great imagery and feeling of the sky. If we could wish upon a star and be blessed with a wish. Blessings my friend
Anaya Avatar
August 16, 2022 at 11:54 AM
Sometimes out of boredom and curiosity, God peeks at earth, and at that moment, some stars escape from God’s grip. Why take the chance not to wish upon a star? I felt emotional and engaged. Victor was this all just another dream, or did your wish come true.
Kendrick Avatar
August 14, 2022 at 9:15 AM
Creative work about love and beauty. I have only seen two falling stars in my lifetime. I felt blessed that I had to change to see one and not die by the object falling on me. I enjoyed reading this one. Very creative work describing the picture. Thank you for sharing and for visiting my page. Sara
Kitchin Avatar
August 13, 2022 at 7:08 PM
Victor, a sweet and charming poem!
Gorelick Avatar
August 13, 2022 at 3:10 PM
Thrilled that you and your beloved found each other on such an enchanted starry starry night. Beautifully engaging! Robert
Callus Avatar
August 13, 2022 at 1:53 AM
I enjoyed the delightful imagery and the emotional streak, Victor. We wish for what we miss, more than what we want. ~ Best regards // paul
Edmonds  Avatar
August 12, 2022 at 2:21 PM
They say when you wish upon a star your dreams come true, if only they could. A beautiful poem Victor. We should be able to view a meteor shower after midnight tonight, I do hope to see it… Belle
Roper Avatar
August 12, 2022 at 9:50 AM
Love it, so much love... I love to see falling stars.. Blessings my friend
George Avatar
August 11, 2022 at 9:37 PM
Carried away by the beautiful imagery of the falling stars. You always carry your readers to a land magical and enchanting. Lovely penning, Victor. Greatly enjoyed !
Dietrich Avatar
August 11, 2022 at 12:59 PM
this is so enchantiing, as Evelyn down here says. Love it, Victor
Ricci Avatar
August 11, 2022 at 12:35 PM
Hello Victor. Your words take us away as we are mesmerized within the scene and moment. This is truly beautiful. Thank you for sharing with us. Blessings now and always.
Buehler Avatar
August 11, 2022 at 12:20 PM
An enchanting and mysterious night is gorgeously portrayed in this romantic poem, with a wonderful, happy ending. This is a fave. :)
Andresen Avatar
August 11, 2022 at 3:05 AM
- Such a night sky I have never seen...sounds beautifully described in your words, Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Tor Avatar
August 10, 2022 at 2:22 PM
We will do anything to find true love even things we are not sure about. A desperate search to find love, you used stars in the hope of. I wish sometimes Victor it was that easy to do and find, your were very fortunate in this creative search for love my friend. Hope you are doing well...
May Avatar
August 10, 2022 at 12:53 PM
A falling star ignites a wish, to join the constellation of romance, Wonderful write Victor
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 10, 2022 at 10:43 AM
Hello Victor, this is a wonderful dream. Did you see her face? Or was it clouded? Enjoy your day my friend.
Poet Avatar
August 10, 2022 at 7:46 AM
Victor, you have a way with words that is both enchanting and seductive. Your subject of love amidst meteor showers is brought to life in almost every aspect. It is an extraordinary experience to view falling stars in the darkness, although it is more special to do it for the person you love the most in the world.
Pandit Avatar
August 10, 2022 at 5:58 AM
Delightfully charming and romantic write, Victor. Every detail paints your theme of love amid falling stars.
Rose  Avatar
August 10, 2022 at 4:10 AM
Ah, you make my heart feel every word penned, she is there behind a tree and up in heaven and all around you. She is there when you breathe, when you write, and when you long for her, Your Lily of beauty is waiting for you, in her wedding gown, smile my dear, for she doesn't like frowns, she loves you near or far, and I do too xo
Rodrigues Avatar
August 10, 2022 at 3:48 AM
Love that ending…know your love. Love the imagery. A fave!
Skelly Avatar
August 10, 2022 at 3:23 AM
It has just occurred to me ~I have never seen a meteor shower, it must be thrilling and a perfect subject for poetry...Delice
Horsman Avatar
August 10, 2022 at 2:25 AM
Love reading your poetry, Victor.
Seeker Avatar
August 10, 2022 at 12:52 AM
Unwavering love focus! She is a lucky girl!
Cunningham Avatar
August 10, 2022 at 12:03 AM
It's really amazing to watch a meteor shower on a dark night and even better to share it with the love of your life. Tom
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