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Falling Leaves

Autumn leaves fall Dancing in the breeze Carpeting the ground Underneath our feet Nature’s glory does enthrall Skeleton like trees Rooted to the ground Spring’s cycle will repeat Trees again will be complete Jan Allison 23rd October 2014

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Chris Tian

Date: 10/26/2014 9:34:00 AM

Fall is my favorite season. The changing colors and the piles of leaves. I really like this Jan. God bless.

Jan Allison
Date: 10/26/2014 9:35:00 AM

I love the Autumn too Ronnie it's a delightful time of year:-) Hugs Jan xx

Faye Gibson

Date: 10/24/2014 7:06:00 PM

I love the cycle of nature, Jan. This is beautiful...in my home state we have stunning fall color. I find winter a little tedious any more; that's why we have escaped to Florida.

Jan Allison
Date: 10/24/2014 7:07:00 PM

My too Faye i love all the seasons each ones brings something wondrous to our lives:-) Hugs jan xxx

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/24/2014 2:55:00 PM

tremendous flow and beautifully conveyed... love the transformation, jan.. huggs

Jan Allison
Date: 10/24/2014 3:05:00 PM

Thank you so much for the lovely comment Nette:-) Hugs jan xxx

Jasmine Cruz

Date: 10/24/2014 2:21:00 PM

beautiful poem. I love the seasons. its like the tree springs to life and then hibernates. nice one

Jan Allison
Date: 10/24/2014 2:52:00 PM

Many thanks for your lovely comment:-) Hugs jan xx

Timothy Hicks

Date: 10/24/2014 11:40:00 AM

My favorite part was the skeleton like trees rooted to the ground. It's an expression that I can safely say I've never heard before. It gives me this odd image that trees are just like people except they stand firmly in place... weird thought, I know.

Jan Allison
Date: 10/24/2014 12:16:00 PM

It came out of my mind so it's bound to be weird lol:-) thanks for the great comment:-) Hugs jan xx

Emeka Offor

Date: 10/24/2014 10:24:00 AM

Again and yet again, the cycle continues. The seasons come and go. We remain part of it. Nice work

Jan Allison
Date: 10/24/2014 10:25:00 AM

Thank you so much for the lovely comment Emeka:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 10/24/2014 9:07:00 AM

How nicely versed, I like your vision of the falling leaves and the skeletal trees. a 7 from me :) eve

Jan Allison
Date: 10/24/2014 9:52:00 AM

thank you so much for the lovely comment and high rating Eve:-) Hugs Jan xx

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 10/24/2014 6:06:00 AM

The master painter plays with brush and canvas. But she is not whimsical. She is a maestro and completes her composition touching all notes methodically. Nature. Graceful poem. very very graceful. Love Jan!....RAJATc

Jan Allison
Date: 10/24/2014 7:34:00 AM

Thank you for that charming comment Rajat:-) Hugs jan xx

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 10/24/2014 5:40:00 AM

The marvelous cycle of life in a nutshell! Excellent, dear Jan! Hugs xx

Jan Allison
Date: 10/24/2014 7:33:00 AM

Thank you so much Demetrios for the lovely comment:-) Hugs jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/24/2014 12:11:00 AM

Returns me to a rendezvous at a tree filled park in my youth. Laying on the leaves and watching them fall while wrapped in warm arms. Nice one Jan!

Jan Allison
Date: 10/24/2014 2:58:00 AM

Thanks so much for the lovely comment Connie:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Seren Roberts

Date: 10/23/2014 9:48:00 PM

lovely one Jan a great read...Seren

Jan Allison
Date: 10/24/2014 2:57:00 AM

Thanks Seren:-) Hugs Jan xx

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 10/23/2014 8:57:00 PM

What a fantastic poem Jan. It has a wonderful ring to it. I love it.

Jan Allison
Date: 10/24/2014 2:56:00 AM

This only came about from a challenge set by Casarah abcdabcdd form so I gave it a go then realised Tim's summer poem was also the same form:-) Hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 10/23/2014 5:31:00 PM

What Maurice said especially the part about Cas... It is awesome... Hugs Tim

Jan Allison
Date: 10/23/2014 5:34:00 PM

Thanks as ever Tim:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 10/23/2014 4:29:00 PM

You said it Jan spring cycle will repeat and I can't wait for spring. lol Nice descriptive poem. love phyl

Jan Allison
Date: 10/23/2014 4:32:00 PM

Nor me Phyllis I want to skip winter lol Hugs Jan xx

James Fraser

Date: 10/23/2014 4:02:00 PM

Oh to cut all these words out. Throw them into the air, and anew appears, wow. Love it Jan, nice one, James :)

James Fraser
Date: 10/23/2014 4:49:00 PM

Understandable Jan, and when Spring arrives, I'll bounce like a lamb along with you, James xxx

Jan Allison
Date: 10/23/2014 4:05:00 PM

Thanks James I guess I just want the year and the bad times to be over so will skip winter and have Spring in my life:-( hugs jan xx

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 10/23/2014 3:57:00 PM

Very pretty piece. I love this time of year and love your "carpet". BG

Jan Allison
Date: 10/23/2014 4:00:00 PM

Thanks for the lovely comment Barbara:-) Each season brings its own delights:-) hugs Jan xxx

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 10/23/2014 3:36:00 PM

What Cas said! Especially the part about fast forwarding winter. Great write as always.

Jan Allison
Date: 10/23/2014 3:41:00 PM

Thanks Maurice I think I guess I just want this year to be over and skip through the bad parts I know are to come. Hugs Jan xxx

Casarah Nance

Date: 10/23/2014 3:32:00 PM

Oh I like it! :) I'm ready for spring, wish we could just fast forward winter this year. I'm not ready for it!

Jan Allison
Date: 10/23/2014 3:40:00 PM

I think in my heart I just want this year to be over:-( Hugs jan xxx