Falling Leaves

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Poetry/Tanka/Falling Leaves
Copyright Protected, ID 10-1592-585-26
All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France

Written, October 26, 2023
Submitted to the International Contest, Autumn Reveries 2
Sponsor, JCB Brul, Judged 10/26/2023

Second Place

The Poetry of Exile—James Joyce, Rumi & Adrian Rice — Steemit

golden leaves drifting trees whisper in the wind forlorn reveries- trees once wearing stained glass hues hold a few golden children

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Marikate Kingston

Date: 11/9/2023 5:28:00 PM

How pretty. Autumn gives us so much to write about. Leaves of different colors and shapes from different trees held together, make as beautiful of a bouquet as flowers do. I read your poem several times, then closed my eyes to see your words. To me, it is a poem that 'feels' nice. It would be nice to walk through it's colors, sounds and autumn scents.

Constance La France
Date: 11/9/2023 9:42:00 PM

Marikate, thank you so much for the compliment and lovely comment, appreciate, blessings

Silent One

Date: 10/28/2023 11:06:00 AM

Lovely imagery..

Constance La France
Date: 10/28/2023 1:55:00 PM

Silent, thank you so much for the compliment, I was inspired by a tree outside my window with only a few gold leaves left, blessings

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/27/2023 3:52:00 PM

Yes I saw the part of his contest that said tanka was now removed. Sure hope you get a win from Brian with this gem

Constance La France
Date: 10/28/2023 1:56:00 PM

Andrea, we never know if we will get a placement, but I love the poem no matter what, blessings

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/26/2023 3:11:00 PM

This is so lovely. But I am confused . There is a recent contest for monoku but under the rules, it is asking for tanka. I wonder if some people are doing monoku.

Constance La France
Date: 10/27/2023 3:27:00 AM

Andrea, thank you so much for the compliment, I know the contest you are referring to and I double checked it is asking for monoku, blessings