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Falling Leaves

I ride with brisk wind leaves falling like rain Twirling all over the pavement of the road Then, settling in piles of union together The last beauty of fall is now bestowed Take a nice ride in our freedom today Cherish the last moments of this season Because so much is always changing With or without a reason Heidi Sands 11/6/19

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Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 11/9/2019 9:26:00 AM

Beautiful wisdom expressed in this autumnal dressed poem, Heidi! Your ink glow shines so joyously brightly. Stellar poetry, my dear friend. Love and more love always.

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/9/2019 9:36:00 AM

Thank you Freddie. I am grateful for your kind comments and positive feedback. I hope you have a nice day :)

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 11/6/2019 6:55:00 PM

Hello Heidi … the seasons are really nice to contemplate with, and to be in autumn with rustic coloured leaves falling over and around you must be a comforting feeling that you do feel a part of nature - thank you Heidi - Lindsay

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/6/2019 10:32:00 PM

Yes, the seasons are so nice with the beautiful changes and it is comforting to see. Thank you very much Lindsay :)

Chris Green

Date: 11/6/2019 11:08:00 AM

This was beautiful my friend. Leaves falling like rain, that is a wonderful image to ponder. Loved this one Heidi.

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/6/2019 11:09:00 AM

Thank you Chris. They were all falling like rain, this morning. I am happy you love this one :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 11/6/2019 9:39:00 AM

Hi Heidi, I like the comparison of the " falling leaves" with life and how it change. As always, great job. Have a fantastic day:-) Alexis

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/6/2019 9:41:00 AM

Thank you so much Alexis. Have a nice day :)