Falling Into Perfection

Thoughts precipitate Like snowfall on Christmas day The perfect gift

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/10/2014 4:26:00 PM

Joseph, .. I posted a new poem would you like to take a trip and read my poem..... You will find your name on my latest... hehehehHeheheh, WARNNING!!! It is a long poem... :) :) LINDA

Joseph May
Date: 1/10/2014 9:18:00 PM

It was a lovely trip down memory lane PD, and sad to see you say you're leaving...hugs

Wendy Meyer

Date: 12/26/2013 10:40:00 PM

thoughts have come exceptionally alive on this Christmastime. Love the idea of fallen-snow thoughts.. Merry Christmas!

Monterey Sirak

Date: 12/24/2013 7:18:00 AM

Beautiful thoughts expressed in an amazing haiku! Merry Christmas to you

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 12/23/2013 8:33:00 PM

Interesting Haiku. Well expressed : ) Always, Laura

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/21/2013 9:01:00 AM

WOW, what a haiku!!!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/20/2013 11:51:00 AM

- Yes,the perfect gift - well done Joseph! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)