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Falling In Love Too Fast

Too fast
To last

Too slow?
You go.


Too free
to be

Too young
To see

True love
Coo dove

Few knew....

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Date: 2/24/2022 7:56:00 AM
Those falling in love too fast will be too slow in growing in love and their love is likely to burn out too fast. With deft strokes, you have drawn the beginning and end of impulsive love, dear friend !
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 2/24/2022 3:24:00 PM
Thank you Valsa
Date: 2/23/2022 11:20:00 AM
I love how you laid this one out. Footles? Then a dynamite last line.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 2/24/2022 2:22:00 AM
I do not dare do footles, Gershon is an expert at them.

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