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Falling In Love

Falling in Love I looked and realized I was feeling hypnotized This lady I was talking to She could fit into my shoe The wave length was second to none All our talk about what we have done The physical attraction the having fun There is nowhere else I would like to be The best part is she feels the same about me I thought I had loved before till I met this lady I adore This is the end of our lonely float we sail on forever

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Debbie Duncan

Date: 6/17/2017 4:37:00 PM

Oh, I love this niall, so much it can fit in my shoe :) Glad you liked my From Him,,, I always say the name so we don't forget where we left off :) Andrea says she likes me doing that :)

Niall Fulham
Date: 6/17/2017 5:25:00 PM

Hi Debbie , thank you for your lovely comment , I am glad you liked :)))))hugs

Becca Teagan

Date: 5/26/2017 10:56:00 PM

aw, this is awesome! The end of your lonely float, now that you've found your lady. Very nice.

Niall Fulham
Date: 5/27/2017 4:39:00 AM

Hi Becca , glad you liked , I was going to say ' she floats my boat' lol there are so many ways to start and end write so much fun :))))hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/26/2017 4:27:00 PM

- A fun line, Niall - "She could fit into my shoe" :)) - .... (a lady with big feet :))) - A pleasure to read - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Niall Fulham
Date: 5/26/2017 4:53:00 PM

Hi Anne-Lise , Happy weekend to you too ,lol she would be odd looking , I take a size 11 :))))big size hug