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~Falling In Love~ ( Rhyme ) The sky turns from day to night There we go my Love in a flight Heart then wander at last free Till you take me to new heights You enchant me more as days go by We're entwined in this love so divine Thunder clouds roll in, covering dawn But I just feel in your arms so fine Your love is in me deeply ingrained With true patterns of beauty remained Life give me a taste of your love to quench I only think of you while I sit in this bench Lost, still navigating in the sea of your love Dreaming till flying with you to heaven above. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2014 December,23,2014

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Date: 12/23/2014 12:09:00 AM
Nice romantic and emotional expressions on love, Dorian
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Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 3/25/2015 6:15:00 PM
Thank you so very kindly, Dr. Ram, for stopping by and commenting on my poem. Heartfelt appreciated, dear friend! Wishing you a very lovely evening! In His light! God bless you! :-) D.

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