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Falling In Love

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Oh kiss me softly, kiss me sweet, Such love will set me on my feet. My heart so warm, I feel its beat. Our warm lips are now meant to meet. Such love will set me on my feet. Let's fly high, where blue is the sky, Our warm lips are now meant to meet. There, larks swoop joining us up high. Let's fly high, where blue is the sky, Their harmonic song makes us cry, There, larks swoop joining us up high. So our love no one will deny. Their harmonic song makes us cry, My heart so warm, I feel its beat. So our love no one will deny. Oh kiss me softly, kiss me sweet,

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 11/5/2023 7:23:00 PM

Fabulous pantoum dear Victor. The repeating phrases are unique and perfectly constructed. hugs, :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/31/2023 8:37:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your romantic one. The begging of love is so rich that it makes our hearts come alive to its music. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara

Maria Williams

Date: 10/31/2023 4:51:00 AM

A beautiful romantic Pantoum. I love the way you wrote it. Hugs

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 10/30/2023 2:37:00 AM

B.e.a.u.t.i.f.u.l.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/29/2023 1:50:00 PM

- A beautiful and romantic poem, Victor ... fly on romantic clouds :) - hugs

Silent One

Date: 10/28/2023 3:58:00 AM

I love a good pantoum... your wrote this one so well and it is so romantic..nice rhymes and flows and pantoums can be difficult, but your did this one perfectly

Shirley Hawkins

Date: 10/27/2023 10:01:00 PM

Such a romantic, clever poem, Victor. I could imagine every line, You are a true poet. Thank you, for sharing. I hope you are as well as can be expected. Look after yourself. Shirley (Old Duck.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 10/27/2023 7:32:00 PM

The beautiful words of this verse are as melodious as song. The imagery is breathtaking and transports the reader to blue skies of romance.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/27/2023 3:48:00 PM

Beautiful pantoum, Victor. Really nice.

Sotto Poet

Date: 10/27/2023 1:28:00 PM

Victor, I must say, your poem has truly left me in awe. It is simply outstanding, a masterpiece in every sense. The theme gracefully weaves its way from beginning to end, captivating the reader's emotions. The romantic and rhythmic flow of your words is simply mesmerizing, creating a symphony of emotions within the heart. Your imagery is extraordinary; it paints vivid pictures that transport the reader into the depths of your love.

Ink Empress

Date: 10/27/2023 12:07:00 PM

Passionate pantoum that flows with such profound and heartfelt lines! Absolutely love the flow and rhythm of this and the refrains all go so well together! Very well crafted! And presented! Pleasure reading this soulfully poetic take

I Am Anaya

Date: 10/27/2023 9:14:00 AM

"Let's fly high, where blue is the sky" I love the repeat line, Victor. Salute to sweet love. Amor xo

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 10/27/2023 7:58:00 AM

Wow. That is a terrific poem. The theme carried through smoothly.

Eve Roper

Date: 10/27/2023 6:25:00 AM

Great Pantoum, Victor, romantic and rhythmically flowing. Blessings my friend.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/27/2023 5:55:00 AM

So sweet, Victor! <3

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/27/2023 5:22:00 AM

Much enjoyed the dance of romantic words, Victor. A splendid invitation to joy of romance.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 10/27/2023 4:22:00 AM

a lovely and melodic love poem, Victor. Your imagery was fabulous, evoking your love. Nicely done, Sara

Karen Jones

Date: 10/27/2023 3:18:00 AM

So warm and melodic. The imagery is strong. I can just see the sky bird and lovers lips. Great picture. You really show you are quite romantic with this poem.