Victor Buhagiar Poet Pantoum

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Falling In Love

Oh kiss me softly, kiss me sweet,
Such love will set me on my feet.
My heart so warm, I feel its beat.
Our warm lips are now meant to meet.

Such love will set me on my feet.
Let's fly high, where blue is the sky,
Our warm lips are now meant to meet.
There, larks swoop joining us up high.

Let's fly high, where blue is the sky,
Their harmonic song makes us cry,
There, larks swoop joining us up high.
So our love no one will deny.

Their harmonic song makes us cry,
My heart so warm, I feel its beat.
So our love no one will deny.
Oh kiss me softly, kiss me sweet,

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Linda Alice Fowler November 5, 2023 at 7:23 PM Fabulous pantoum dear Victor. The repeating phrases are unique and perfectly constructed. hugs, :)

Sara Kendrick October 31, 2023 at 8:37 AM I enjoyed reading your romantic one. The begging of love is so rich that it makes our hearts come alive to its music. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara

Maria Williams October 31, 2023 at 4:51 AM A beautiful romantic Pantoum. I love the way you wrote it. Hugs

Unseeking Seeker October 30, 2023 at 2:37 AM B.e.a.u.t.i.f.u.l.

Anne-Lise Andresen October 29, 2023 at 1:50 PM - A beautiful and romantic poem, Victor ... fly on romantic clouds :) - hugs

Silent One October 28, 2023 at 3:58 AM I love a good pantoum... your wrote this one so well and it is so romantic..nice rhymes and flows and pantoums can be difficult, but your did this one perfectly

Shirley Hawkins October 27, 2023 at 10:01 PM Such a romantic, clever poem, Victor. I could imagine every line, You are a true poet. Thank you, for sharing. I hope you are as well as can be expected. Look after yourself. Shirley (Old Duck.

Evelyn Judy Buehler October 27, 2023 at 7:32 PM The beautiful words of this verse are as melodious as song. The imagery is breathtaking and transports the reader to blue skies of romance.

Andrea Dietrich October 27, 2023 at 3:48 PM Beautiful pantoum, Victor. Really nice.

Sotto Poet October 27, 2023 at 1:28 PM Victor, I must say, your poem has truly left me in awe. It is simply outstanding, a masterpiece in every sense. The theme gracefully weaves its way from beginning to end, captivating the reader's emotions. The romantic and rhythmic flow of your words is simply mesmerizing, creating a symphony of emotions within the heart. Your imagery is extraordinary; it paints vivid pictures that transport the reader into the depths of your love.

Ink Empress October 27, 2023 at 12:07 PM Passionate pantoum that flows with such profound and heartfelt lines! Absolutely love the flow and rhythm of this and the refrains all go so well together! Very well crafted! And presented! Pleasure reading this soulfully poetic take

I Am Anaya October 27, 2023 at 9:14 AM "Let's fly high, where blue is the sky" I love the repeat line, Victor. Salute to sweet love. Amor xo

Hilda Greenhough October 27, 2023 at 7:58 AM Wow. That is a terrific poem. The theme carried through smoothly.

Eve Roper October 27, 2023 at 6:25 AM Great Pantoum, Victor, romantic and rhythmically flowing. Blessings my friend.

Kim Rodrigues October 27, 2023 at 5:55 AM So sweet, Victor! <3

Vijay Pandit October 27, 2023 at 5:22 AM Much enjoyed the dance of romantic words, Victor. A splendid invitation to joy of romance.

Karen Jones October 27, 2023 at 3:18 AM So warm and melodic. The imagery is strong. I can just see the sky bird and lovers lips. Great picture. You really show you are quite romantic with this poem.