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Falling From Her Hand

She gazed beyond the sweet sycamore tree Her ruby locket swaying Hanging in broken light

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 4/28/2017 8:50:00 PM
wow, this is so succinct and descriptive at the same time. I love it, Rick. Congratulations.
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Date: 4/28/2017 4:45:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Rick. Lovely image.
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Date: 4/8/2017 8:20:00 PM
I love the assonance of swaying with hanging here. Also gazed in the first line. This is a really nicely crafted kimo. Soupmail.
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Date: 4/6/2017 7:25:00 AM
I love the phrase "broken light". Good luck in the contest, Rick.
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