Falling Apart Song

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Falling Apart. ( Song ) . Inspired by a Toni Braxton song. . My whole world fell apart today When I found my love Had left and gone away A sea of tears flowed from my eyes And the stats fell from the skies . She wrote a letter saying she found someone new I was like a lost child not knowing what to do Heartbroken and confused . An Angel left and a Devil came by today . To think I gave her the world She promised to be my forever girl Life has no meaning any more Since she left and walked through the door No I’m crawling on the floor Can’t take any more…. . The bed we made love on is now a bed of nails I have lost the wind that filled my sails For she was my destiny But now darkness is all I see I still cannot believe Such an angel could do this to me . I cling on to a glimmer of hope She will soon return When her fun is over and she has leaned And got her fingers burned . My whole world fell apart today When I found my love Had left and gone away A sea of tears flowed from my eyes . And the stars fell from the skies . To think I gave her the world She promised to be my forever girl Life has no meaning any more Since she left and walked through the door No I’m crawling on the floor Can’t take any more…. . Peter Dome©2021.

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Akkina Downing

Date: 1/16/2021 8:40:00 PM

I'd love to hear this heartfelt song. Pete, I truly believe you are one of the amazing poets here whom have inspired me. I know I'm a rookie and much have to learn but truly, I enjoy everyone of yours that i read... I'm smiling for you :)

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 1/16/2021 2:36:00 PM

i can feel the pain behind the words...x

Peter Dome
Date: 1/16/2021 3:34:00 PM

Bless had to let it out love. Hope you are ok kitten, x

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 1/16/2021 12:35:00 PM

Hello Peter, so far I have only written one Lyric song. It is about several songs. My fav, songs. Sad songs makes me cry. It always did and still does. I feel for you. No it is not about talent it is about creating poetry. We are all poets. Some better than others. Cheers Darlene X

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/17/2021 6:09:00 AM

Hello Peter, I also enjoy to creating my own poetry and reading othe poets poets poems. I have a collection of poetry books i have bought. I read them often. Thank you Peter I will you do the same. Thank you for the lovely comment. XXXXX Darlene

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/17/2021 6:03:00 AM

Hello Peter, We both get emotional with sad love songs. Thank you Peter i enjoy to read your poetry to. Right not about talent. Yes for you it gives you your heart and soul blood and life. Well i see t the same way you do. Iy is good to expressoneself.

Peter Dome
Date: 1/16/2021 3:42:00 PM

the same as me. i get too emotional. I'd love to read your poem.not about talent so right. for me it's giving my heart soul and blood. it's my life. i have to express or die.I am on a FB site Echo's of timless classics if you want to join and share. Thank you.you are a sweetheart stay safe. XXX

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/16/2021 12:10:00 PM

Yes it is beyond a joke . I remarked on it earlier today. Try to post early. A sad song but well done. I wrote a lyric this week but few were interested in it. I got more hits for a haiku!! ~~

Peter Dome
Date: 1/16/2021 3:47:00 PM

Hi Victor so true my friend it wouldn't take much to fix things around here.I think a lot of people are too bloody lazy to read others poems unless they are short. Bit still expect others to comment on theirs's. thanks stay safe Pete..

Peter Dome

Date: 1/16/2021 11:21:00 AM

81 reads and no comment.?. This site is beyond a joke!.And to say we pay money where is the support?. I'm grateful for every comment.I'm sure admin could do something I notice a few things that would improve things. Make things easier for all. It's not so much about talent on here but clearly who you know!.