Falling

Catch me Before I hit the ground The air has gone I’m left all alone Dropping quickly Floating no more Splat!

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/14/2010 11:43:00 PM

wow! what a punch (metaphor speaking) Wilma,, the splay says it all, enjoyed,..p.d.

Chris Smith

Date: 8/14/2010 9:25:00 PM

You will never hit the ground, for your friends will be here to catch you.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/14/2010 3:06:00 PM

Oh no, not "splat," not that! I'll be there to catch you, Wilma. Just let me know if you feel like you're starting to fall. I've had some dreams similar to this. Enjoyed the humor! Love, Carolyn

Daver Austin

Date: 8/14/2010 10:48:00 AM

OUCH! Did you read about the guy who fell 40 floors? The fall didn't hurt him - it was the sudden stop! I like your humor, Wilma. Dave